Young

Young; I’m strong, Do no wrong, Thrilling the throng… singing a sweet song. This is where I belong Living with words all along…

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2010 8:33:00 PM

So as we all live ...with words all along Adeleke.. a wonderful contribution to entertain us with these wonderful words luv... enjoyed.. super creative .. happy weekend... what happend to Tirzah?

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/18/2010 5:42:00 PM

nice a short but has a good point to it my friend

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 11/15/2010 3:18:00 AM

Adeleke, you are so blessed with rhymes and imagery. well done sir. love, Lightening Ink.

Nate D.

Date: 10/15/2010 12:01:00 PM

interesting write my friend'

Kolapo Olapoju

Date: 10/7/2010 3:03:00 AM

Nice

Milton Toran

Date: 9/23/2010 3:08:00 PM

Short, simple, and straight to the point! This expresses the real you. When you've got it, you've got it! Why not flaunt it? Great job! Milt

Andrew Crisci

Date: 9/22/2010 7:17:00 AM

What a thoughtful, inspiring and honest poem, Adeleke! This is the very reflection of your beautiful soul. Thanks for placing my poem in your contest, " Through...Thoughtful... Thankful." It is always a pleasure and honor to enter your inpiring contests. Have a wonderful day. Love and admiration, Andrew.