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You Needed Me

You (knee)ded me

For so long, I felt 
so empty and all alone
but, you came along
and you (knee)ded me.
You touched me with
your love, you filled me up
from my head down to my toes
(my belly too, I might add
that was tasty, mmmmm)
My love is complete, 
strong and true,
my arms long to hold you
my fingers too.
I will declare my love to
all your family 
Your Aunt and Ankle too.
Just swear to me that you
love me, cause I (knee)d you too.



John Derek Hamilton
September 13,2016

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Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 10/8/2016 12:21:00 AM Great sense of humor. Well done! :) Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 10/8/2016 7:41:00 PM Great Thanks Sunita

Jan Allison Date: 10/7/2016 5:22:00 PM Very humerus John - eye loved reading it again:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 10/8/2016 7:40:00 PM Right Thanks Jan

Sandra Haight Date: 10/7/2016 8:48:00 AM Fun and creative, John. Congrats on your placement! Sandra Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 10/7/2016 2:23:00 PM Thanks Sandra

Beautiful Scars Date: 10/7/2016 8:01:00 AM very creative John., love this one...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 10/7/2016 2:23:00 PM Thanks Laura

Teddy Kimathi Date: 10/7/2016 4:40:00 AM Congrats John, for your placement with this fascinating work!!! ;-) Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 10/7/2016 6:58:00 AM Thanks Teddy was a fun one!

Viv Wigley Date: 10/7/2016 12:28:00 AM Great little write, John, and thanks for entering my contest. Well done. Regards, Viv Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 10/7/2016 6:58:00 AM Thanks Viv was a fun one!

Joanna Daniel Date: 9/24/2016 8:20:00 AM This is fun:) all the best for the contest:) Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 10/7/2016 6:58:00 AM Thanks Jo

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/15/2016 12:43:00 AM This is a fun one John! Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 9/15/2016 8:45:00 AM Thanks Richard, I think I confused people because it starts off serious, any way lets see if Viv thinks it's funny

Jan Allison Date: 9/14/2016 6:49:00 PM ha ha ha hilarious John I think this will appeal to Viv's sense of humour he is a very humerus guy:-) hugs Jan xx7 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/17/2016 4:02:00 PM Well you can guess mine wasn't serious lol:-) hugs Jan xx John Hamilton Date: 9/14/2016 10:06:00 PM Yeah I got that in the instructions but I see so many serious entries I'm second guessing myself now, thanks Jan.

Flower Demon Date: 9/13/2016 8:55:00 PM Beautiful write, also very meaningful loved your work Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 9/14/2016 9:20:00 AM Thanks for the visit and comment

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/13/2016 12:28:00 PM i'm so liking this, john.. playful, lithe , and so well written!.. lol for ankle!..huggs Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 9/13/2016 1:50:00 PM Thanks Nette just having fun with words!