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You (knee)ded me For so long, I felt so empty and all alone but, you came along and you (knee)ded me. You touched me with your love, you filled me up from my head down to my toes (my belly too, I might add that was tasty, mmmmm) My love is complete, strong and true, my arms long to hold you my fingers too. I will declare my love to all your family Your Aunt and Ankle too. Just swear to me that you love me, cause I (knee)d you too. John Derek Hamilton September 13,2016

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Date: 10/8/2016 12:21:00 AM
Great sense of humor. Well done! :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/8/2016 7:41:00 PM
Great Thanks Sunita
Date: 10/7/2016 5:22:00 PM
Very humerus John - eye loved reading it again:-) hugs jan xx
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/8/2016 7:40:00 PM
Right Thanks Jan
Date: 10/7/2016 8:48:00 AM
Fun and creative, John. Congrats on your placement! Sandra
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/7/2016 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Sandra
Date: 10/7/2016 8:01:00 AM
very creative John., love this one...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/7/2016 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Laura
Date: 10/7/2016 4:40:00 AM
Congrats John, for your placement with this fascinating work!!! ;-)
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/7/2016 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Teddy was a fun one!
Date: 10/7/2016 12:28:00 AM
Great little write, John, and thanks for entering my contest. Well done. Regards, Viv
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/7/2016 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Viv was a fun one!
Date: 9/24/2016 8:20:00 AM
This is fun:) all the best for the contest:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/7/2016 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Jo
Date: 9/15/2016 12:43:00 AM
This is a fun one John!
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/15/2016 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I think I confused people because it starts off serious, any way lets see if Viv thinks it's funny
Date: 9/14/2016 6:49:00 PM
ha ha ha hilarious John I think this will appeal to Viv's sense of humour he is a very humerus guy:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2016 4:02:00 PM
Well you can guess mine wasn't serious lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/14/2016 10:06:00 PM
Yeah I got that in the instructions but I see so many serious entries I'm second guessing myself now, thanks Jan.
Date: 9/13/2016 8:55:00 PM
Beautiful write, also very meaningful loved your work
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/14/2016 9:20:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and comment
Date: 9/13/2016 12:28:00 PM
i'm so liking this, john.. playful, lithe , and so well written!.. lol for ankle!..huggs
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/13/2016 1:50:00 PM
Thanks Nette just having fun with words!

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