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“Love needn’t be very eloquent. It calms down into silence as man and wife grow old together with sweet memories of the years gone by, which speak to them more vociferous than words” ~ By poet Years rolled by in silence With the ease of clouds drifting away Sometimes as waves pounding the shore They walk, along the much-trodden path The same grass beneath, the same gravel Emotions surge and die in their hearts Careful of every step, they trudge Sometimes lean on one another Two birds fly past them Their eyes are simultaneously riveted They move on, hardly uttering anything Basking in the warmth of silence Among them words are redundant Their cataract eyes reflect A clear sparkle of contentment Hardly visible to an outsider! They move on with waves of memories, Of all the years gone by, knowing quite well, Life won’t be the same as before, In the twilight years, but they see clearly The stars beckoning them In lustrous luminosity from a distance! May.5.2023 Entered for Brian Strand Premiere No. 1217 Poetry Contest ~ Placed Second~ Writing Challenge- ‘Y’ Words Poetry Contest Sponsor- Constance La France

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Date: 5/11/2023 10:21:00 PM
Your poetry is of other level. No day , I got bored while reading your poems. Congratulations on your top win in the Contest ...dear Salsa.
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:36:00 PM
BIG congrats on your well deserved win, Valsa.
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:09:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:05:00 PM
Hi Valsa, You penned such a fantastic poem on "Years". I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/11/2023 8:47:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 5/11/2023 7:03:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and I love your quote. !
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Date: 5/10/2023 9:59:00 PM
Hi Valsa, You penned a well-written write on your chosen word. I found it to be a lovely and touching story of two people growing old together. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a great evening;-) Alexis
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Date: 5/5/2023 11:10:00 PM
A dagger in my heart. I will die alone. Still a lovely poem.
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Date: 5/5/2023 6:42:00 PM
Love your picture and poem, so graceful, comforting and peaceful in your words, love it : )
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Date: 5/5/2023 4:16:00 PM
Beautiful poem about growing old together, the type of love we all want. Great work!
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Date: 5/5/2023 3:56:00 PM
Such a lovely image in the picture... Where I live, I don't take walks like the two 'daredevils' in your photo. Too dangerous, unfortunately. Prowlers, misfits, and thugs roam the city these days. If I were younger,... but I'm not...
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Date: 5/5/2023 9:06:00 AM
A wonderful write/quote/picture. Good Luck. Have a blessed day/weekend..........
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Date: 5/5/2023 6:31:00 AM
Love this, Valsa! There is quiet contentment in a couple who have endured many years together. Blessings!
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