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Yarns of a Seafaress

Hemingway’s famous “Old Man and the Sea” Simply couldn’t hold a candle to me I caught Ahab’s great white whale Did some surfing on his tail Made him jump through hoops ‘fore I set him free In Scotland I gave Nessie a big scare As with my huge net, the beast I did snare I held on as Nessie tugged Then set her free as I shrugged To tell the truth, Nessie hadn’t a prayer And now I’ve set my sights on the Kraken Oh yes, I’m more than a fishing bumpkin And so for Norway I sail To prove women aren’t frail This giant squid is simply a munchkin . Written for Susan’s “Ridiculous Self-Exaggerations” contest *Last line is the metaphor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2012 7:49:00 AM
It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Carolyn. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Your words are appreciated more then you know. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/17/2012 1:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Carolyn, on your fine win! Love, Maureen xx
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Date: 2/16/2012 3:32:00 PM
LOL! Congrats! Very Good!
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Date: 2/16/2012 9:32:00 AM
congrats Carolyn on a great well desedrved first place win with this grand title too.. amazing ..
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Date: 2/16/2012 8:05:00 AM
Ya see, I can just picture you trying to live out this tale, Carolyn..You daredevlin gal!! This is spectacular stuff...don't even know how I was ever in the same league with yours. Yours surely outshines mine. A first place with this smash hit...you wrote a thriller here. Hope you are doing great! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/15/2012 10:30:00 PM
Congrats on your terrific first place win, Carolyn! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/15/2012 4:12:00 PM
Carolyn, this is a wonderful piece. Congrats on winning 1st place in Susan's contest.................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn. Great poem as usual. I can never expect to see anything from you that is less than great.
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Date: 2/15/2012 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Susan Burch's "Ridiculous Self Exaggerations" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2012 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn, woman power xx
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:19:00 AM
Lying? Who's lying? Very funny Carolyn and congratulations on your first place. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/15/2012 8:57:00 AM
Now, this is a tale that sounds "fishy" to me!!! But I loved it! Congratulations, Carolyn!!
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Date: 2/15/2012 8:50:00 AM
congratulations Carolyn, marvellous story ...ideal for you ...about the sea....haven't chatted for ages....been real busy....please drop me a line when you are 'on land' haha...best wishes Syd
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Date: 2/15/2012 8:21:00 AM
Congrats Carolyn on your 1st place win in Susan's Contest.Enjoyed the humour very much.
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Date: 2/8/2012 1:54:00 PM
LOL, I smiled all the way through this gem, my friend
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Date: 2/8/2012 9:54:00 AM
Not ridiculous at all, dear Carolyn. You be the one. Love, daver
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:15:00 PM
This is a winner for me! An ode to strong women everywhere even if slightly exaggerated. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/7/2012 4:46:00 PM
I love it! Your bout here with these creatures would be legendary if they were only true! I love the tales of all of them, great nighttime stories! You did truly awesome with this write Carolyn! Great Work!!
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