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12.6.24

Song for this..."I'm Going Down" by Rose Royce

From Dec 25TH—January 5th is Christmastide (12 days of Christmas)

Xmas tide, a time for familial gatherings, The golden chain of friendship …and companions Sweet on each other, parading arm in arm Together to share a feast and gift giving ...Nativity scenes, red, gold, green bells ringing Garlands, wreaths, and holly Holiday romance rekindles and swindles kisses under a mistletoe Lovers making love! …A lonely time for others She arrives solo, one link’s absence sears her heart yet another year Smiles seem forced they’ll think …Cry out the hosts, Drink up, plenty of champaign ! Chums come and go quickly Good to flatter one in a funk or ho-hum The dinner is served, everyone rejoices Mingles and reacquaint Toasts and jingles can’t take her gaze away True feelings are hidden Like a disconsolate widow, mournfully she yearns for him Not a soul to tell, nor a cherished confidant to share a secret or a private matter Of the sensuality of karma sutra wooing her gently Mesmerizing thoughts of a distant lover have taken her far from the celebration …His sultry eyes, savory lips Sleekly sinewed neck, and bulging biceps Quite an exquisite exhibition Into his warm embrace and into subservience Draped in satin, his fingertips tracing her curves duplicating guitar intonation on his gears, depressing down fretted notes Making sultry harmonic tunes Counting down at the twelfth fretboard Lusty lullabies erogenous, with more alibies, Keeps silent not to arouse suspicions of an affair's existence that shouldn’t be She counts down the twelve days of Xmas tide
her yearning entails love is starved at Xmas tide~ he plays keep away

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Date: 12/16/2024 6:23:00 PM
In this time of celebration, it's bad to feel so sad and lost - your poem is beautiful, metaphors longing - enjoyed <3
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Date: 12/19/2024 11:12:00 AM
TY, Paige! Happy Holidays to you and yours!
Date: 12/13/2024 12:48:00 PM
Poetry will get you through. Writing frustrations away is the best way. Take it from this fit 70 year old hopeless romantic, going through a painful separation. I thank god every day for the gift of poetry and the love of Children and the ability to make a difference in the community. You have the gift of making the human embrace special and warm not something to be ashamed of to avoid hurt. Brave poem, you took risks and the result showcases your ability. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 12/13/2024 3:34:00 PM
Hi David and thank you for the warmth and concern. Holidays are a lonely time for some and with many different reasons. I’m showcasing the other side of the coin. A festive setting can’t hide what goes on inside, (the pining)…an unrequited melancholy is often the hallmark of the holiday season, always cathartic to express oneself this time of the year. Wishing you all the best on your new journey of self-discovery, healing, and staying virile. Poetry is a great healer for us :):)
Date: 12/9/2024 4:00:00 PM
Anaya, a Christmas moment where someone can't live in the present because of loneliness and a dream of arousal and consummation that pleases (poetically only of course). It's a psychological explanation and exploration of what can happen to someone who feels unsatisfied with their station in life. The strangest part of it all is that relief comes easily to those who can just relax and enjoy the moment. You've delved into some seriously ironic feelings for the holidays. It's significant that we should look at our fellow partygoers with compassion and encourage them to say how they really feel. There are not enough kind people in this world and we need more social workers or even friends! Hope you are well. Smiles!
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Date: 12/10/2024 12:18:00 PM
My goal was to delve into some seriously ironic feelings for the holidays. Self-love will be there for the protagonists healing, they should put themselves first and say what they are feeling, let others help with good advice and healthy choices. I am pleasantly comfortable. :):)
Date: 12/8/2024 9:41:00 PM
Before others who enjoy the Christmas spirit, she puts on a mask of cheer. But her mind is far away. She is longing for the presence of the man of her life and the amorous hours she will have in his exciting presence. This restless longing for a lover is beautifully captured through a lovely Christmas poem. All the Best dear Anaya.
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Date: 12/9/2024 1:00:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa for the beautiful review and comment. Desire can be brutally painful for the lonely lovers. Warmest wishes,xhugs
Date: 12/8/2024 11:06:00 AM
Hey Anaya.. I like how your poem poignantly contrasts the public, festive nature of Christmas with the private experience of loneliness and yearning. The initial celebration, full of holiday imagery, masks your inner turmoil as it navigates the absence of a lover and the painful solitude she feels during a time meant for togetherness. The sensual fantasies she has of a distant lover—captured through vivid, physical imagery— highlight the intensity of her unmet desires, making the holiday cheer feel like a distant echo.
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Date: 12/9/2024 12:57:00 AM
Ty, SO. All the celebration and noise can't help the loneliness of passion’s brutal desires and yearning , gatherings won't stop the tears . Wishing you all the best, Cheers !
Date: 12/7/2024 11:20:00 PM
What a lovely poem. Makes me yearn for the time my wife was still with me. Hugs.
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Date: 12/9/2024 12:45:00 AM
Ty, Victor! Lets hope its a good one without any tears. XHugs
Date: 12/7/2024 6:55:00 PM
A soft tone is set, the mood, being sensual and satisfying, yet sad emotions tangle around good tidings and tinsel. Oh, my ! You've created a masterpiece ! Good luck in the contest, Anaya. Your thoughts are beautiful, tender and emotional. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/9/2024 12:42:00 AM
Ty, Brandy! Your review and kind comments are appreciated. Blessings xo
Date: 12/7/2024 5:11:00 PM
Dear Anaya, This is stunning! Fascinating descriptions of Christmas in first two stanzas, then there is passionate love-making with a tinge of sadness - enjoyed your highly romantic metaphors! Your quill is brilliantly creative! Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 12/9/2024 12:38:00 AM
Thank you, Malaika. I'm delighted that you enjoyed! A different perspective , many relate to loniness during the holidays. Blessings. xhugs
Date: 12/6/2024 11:06:00 PM
Wow. This was a great read. Sexy too but sad. Loved your netaphors
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Date: 12/7/2024 9:14:00 AM
Ty Andrea! It felt like Netflix rom com. A little sad, a lot of love-making. My pre-Xmas write. Can't wait to read yours! :)
Date: 12/6/2024 5:44:00 PM
so lovely poem, Christmas is a special time, enjoyed your beautiful and inspiring penning
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Date: 12/6/2024 7:19:00 PM
A special time indeed, family is always there for you, but not always the lover you yearn for, Yann. Ty! - You make a smile on my face , )

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