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Alas, my wife, your verbose superfluity Displays an obstinate incongruity It's just word play hide and seek Be succinct when you speak Ok—you're a pompous ass in perpetuity! 10/21/22

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Date: 10/25/2022 5:57:00 AM
This is quite interesting---- not her verbosity, but your teasing. Robert, hope this is fictional... :)
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Date: 10/23/2022 6:03:00 PM
lol love this one Robert hope your wife does also...
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Date: 10/23/2022 12:15:00 PM
Oh my, Robert. Can I assume that after this poem you are hiring a food taster?
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 10/23/2022 1:08:00 PM
Indubitably, my good fellow!

Book: Shattered Sighs