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like patient Nature hens keeping nests pluck the eyes of hostile creatures

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Date: 3/16/2025 9:31:00 AM
Dear Trina, I adore the poetic potency of your haiku. Vivid imagery and emotion flow through heart and imagination. Congratulations for your success in Brian's contest. Your golden pen shines always! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/17/2025 12:28:00 PM
Hello Susan. I appreciate your kind words of affirmation.
Date: 3/15/2025 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on this one being on the winners' list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/15/2025 9:11:00 AM
Thanks, Sara. Your encouragement is appreciated :).
Date: 3/13/2025 12:47:00 AM
interesting contrast. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/13/2025 1:05:00 PM
Thank you fellow writer:)
Date: 3/8/2025 7:18:00 PM
Powerful haiku my dear poet friend Trina. I enjoyed this. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 3/8/2025 9:44:00 AM
I love the emotion and the imagery that this haiku conjures. xomo
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/8/2025 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen!

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