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Winter Bites It

Winter Bites It The streets are silent there is no rush hour no back-up in the William’s tunnel no bumper to bumper 36 minutes to the Braintree split The sound of dogs is missing along with bird bush chatter. The wind hums coldly against my windows an artful frost builds up on the inside the old furnace struggles against the sub zero odds the cat paws at the door unaware nature’s litter box is full. John G. Lawless ©1/29/2022

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Date: 1/31/2022 12:10:00 PM
Brrr I can feel those sub-zero temperatures and winter's chilly offering, John. So nice to make it back home to the comfort of a nice warm fire. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/30/2022 11:22:00 PM
A poem describing the silence and numbness winter brings in the surroundings and also inside. "an artful frost builds up on the inside".... feel the emotion in this line. Great write John !
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Date: 1/30/2022 5:39:00 PM
Beautifully said; hang in there, Spring will come again.dwv
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Date: 1/29/2022 4:17:00 PM
Hi John….a lovely poem well described. I love the sentences “the old furnace struggles, against the sub zero odds”. Enjoyed. Debx
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