Wind

Wind ~~~~ Gentle wind's~~~~ delicate fingers Sensually caress... blushing leaves the arctic blast~~ with frozen icicles freeze the leaf's tender marrow the reign of deadly cold--- summer winds~~~~ hot fire dries and curls the leaf's soft life perish to the ground warm spring wind~~~~~ blows revives the parched dying leaf glory has returned By Tahera Mannan For Constance "Nature Four In One" Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2011 11:17:00 PM

I really liked this the first time and just as much now! Congratulations, Tahera!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/7/2011 6:10:00 PM

Wonderful write from you Tahera!Congrats on your win ---kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/7/2011 1:36:00 PM

Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Constance, Tahera

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 1:17:00 PM

What a splendid ending to your write Tahera :) congratulations on your win in Constance's contest :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2011 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's "Nature, Four In One" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/6/2011 10:48:00 PM

wonderful subject Tahera, congrats on this deserved winner. Harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 9:22:00 PM

just divine, tahera! cheers for the win in the contest!! :) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2011 7:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Tahera. Beautiful! Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 7:44:00 PM

Amazing images on the transformation of nature's seasons, Tahera. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 7:28:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your wonderful winning poem in Constance's contest with these rare and beautiful words my friend.. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..

Constance La France

Date: 3/1/2011 5:45:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/26/2011 6:27:00 PM

wow!this is amazing write from you Tahera!Love it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2011 12:28:00 AM

this is really great how you followed thru the cycle of this leaf. With lovely images and also wind as the constant symbol. This should do very well!!