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Will You Be My Valentine

Will you be my valentine said he amorously Oh yes I said but what’s in it for me A radiant jewel Sure dear it will be swell Do note to take my simple wish seriously The day arrived with much fanfare But I didn't seem to give a care For the gift I waited But was soon inflated For he never came to my expectant lair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/24/2011 2:42:00 PM
Men can be very deceptive sometimes, Tahera. People say things as a means to an end. Cute double limerick and I wish you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/22/2011 11:32:00 AM
Koolio Limerick Tahera, good luck in the contest....:)
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:43:00 PM
beautiful Limerick Tahera. For the gift I waited But was soon inflated. This part really resonates, Tahera. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:25:00 AM
Nicely penned Tahera my friend.. great little story in your great little Limerick luv.. good luck in the contest... luv that radiant jewel.. I am a bling person..haha..
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:16:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:24:00 AM
awwhh, bittersweet write that delights my heart, tahera...enchanting! best winning wishes in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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