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Sometimes, I roam a lush green forest... in my mind; birds sing a chorus Being one with nature and admiring it's magnificent splendor; all it has to offer Sometimes I envision... surrendering freely to the beauteous wilderness. Once in a blue moon, I'd hike up the mountains where the rarified air is thin. I'd sit at the summit in a tabula rasa state of mind as if lost in time; surveying the vast sea of tall green trees. I'd picture myself standing at the top with my hands outstretched like Leonardo DiCaprio in the movie, "Titanic," exclaiming... "I'm the king of the world!" magnificent sights wilderness envisioning... in full surrender Writing Challenge - Nature, Four In One - Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Forms: Crystalline(9/8), Kimo(10/7/6), Verse, Haiku(5/7/5) Syllables checked at www.HowManySyllables.com Sponsored by Constance La France Themes chosen: Forest, Trees & Birds Date written: 09/06/2020

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Date: 9/29/2020 1:16:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/29/2020 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Constance:-) I appreciate the FAV!
Date: 9/22/2020 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/poem about nature. I love nature. Your poem made me feel like I was in it. Enjoy your win....................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/22/2020 9:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 9/21/2020 2:40:00 PM
magnificent sights indeed Edward, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/21/2020 5:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan:-)
Date: 9/21/2020 7:07:00 AM
- Being one with nature is wonderful, Edward :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2020 5:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 9/20/2020 5:16:00 PM
Cool unique line: I'd sit at the summit/in a tabula rasa state of mind! Lovely, Edward! Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/21/2020 7:00:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)

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