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Wide Left

He always goes "wide left" when peeing after drinking Expects me to scrub the floor stench; what is he thinking? *Entry for Susan Burch's Couplet contest

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Date: 9/30/2011 10:14:00 AM
Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2011 10:59:00 PM
Awesome win. Congratulations, Carolyn.
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Date: 9/29/2011 4:56:00 PM
Carolyn-Such a gem! Too funny! Congrats. to you
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:41:00 AM
Put a sign on the wall - "Stand close, the next person may be barefoot. LUck in the contest. Love, daver
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Date: 9/26/2011 12:09:00 PM
LOL, this is one for my dad - my mum's always shouting at him for this : )
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Date: 9/25/2011 6:21:00 PM
sounds like he was lucky to even hit the bathroom! That's what the great outdoors is for! Good innovative take on this one Carolyn
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Date: 9/25/2011 4:26:00 PM
wow i get in to trouble for that also, awesome humour, good luck in contest, harry P.S soup mail
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Date: 9/24/2011 10:13:00 PM
EWWWW, who is this gross person? hahaha. GREAT couplet, Carolyn, How are you hanging in there today?
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Date: 9/24/2011 9:37:00 PM
Crazy funny, Carolyn! Lol! The man needs his own Steam mop! lol This is really good. Love, Annalise
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Date: 9/24/2011 8:35:00 PM
Bahahahhahahhaahha that's awsome
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Date: 9/24/2011 8:34:00 PM
Tell him to sit down Caroly, a solution to every problem. It's funny but work too!
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Date: 9/24/2011 5:45:00 PM
lololol... probably thinkin' you will which he'll probably keep thinking long after you stop.. funny one, Caroyn! Happy day~N
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Date: 9/24/2011 3:33:00 PM
Too funny Carolyn!!Good luck..love,deb
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