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Why Impress Me When I Already Love You

Why do you try to impress me. When it’s not even wreath it. - you lie, and say things that are not true. Just so I can like you. - It’s kind of childish and silly. But very hurtful in many ways. - I like you for who you are. Not a person who’s faking about having a car. - All of you is fine. So please stop with the stuff you have combine. - Your hair is cute like the way you have it. Don’t go out to the Barbara and shave it. - Your eyes are black and shine. Like a black diamond on a fancy necklace. - You don’t have to impress me for my love. Because you’re my everything from above.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/26/2016 7:53:00 PM
Sidney, Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 9/20/2012 6:44:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your excellent work about this special person..My daddy would always say something like "I like the dress but I love the girl that is in it much more"..Sara
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Date: 6/6/2012 5:22:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Sindey Forte
Date: 6/6/2012 7:01:00 AM
Thank you i did put all my heart into it.
Date: 6/5/2012 12:20:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Sindey!! A lovely write to your loved one!
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Sindey Forte
Date: 6/6/2012 7:01:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 6/5/2012 11:52:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sindey. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Sindey Forte
Date: 6/6/2012 7:02:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 6/5/2012 10:25:00 AM
Awe This Was sweet to read. Carma
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Sindey Forte
Date: 6/6/2012 7:02:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 6/5/2012 8:20:00 AM
Sindey, just geat ...David
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Sindey Forte
Date: 6/6/2012 7:02:00 AM
Thank You

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