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Where Evil Creeps

An eerie silence wrapped the bog, I dared not move nor speak. The chilling blanket of the fog where evil beings creep, conceals within tormented souls now stirring from their sleep, and there with gruesome fate foretold lie secrets they will keep. Into the darkest night they prowl as silent echoes shriek, and even wolves with frightened howls hide in the forest deep. The terror of the living dead will follow where they tread. A Quatorzain is a centuries old form that was used by those like Shakespeare for creativity not restricted by strict rhyme schemes and syllable counts per line like Sonnets were. Therefore, each Quatorzain could be an original creation, however, it wasn't a totally free form because it was still restricted to 14 lines and usually written in iambic meter, also, unlike a Petrarachan/Italian Sonnet it usually ended with a rhyming couplet. Some have argued that it evolved into the English Sonnet. Writers often played with the number 7 as I have done here with alternating iambic tetrameter and trimeter. I also used mono rhyme in the trimeter lines (something not commonly done with Quatorzains yet, as I alluded, it's the beauty of a more free form). Written October 8th, 2019 for Best New Poem Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Date: 10/21/2019 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement!!
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Date: 10/20/2019 4:37:00 PM
Craig, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/20/2019 4:20:00 PM
You are a great storyteller from your choice of words to how their placement subliminally effect the reader. Great poem Craig Lonna
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Date: 10/19/2019 10:12:00 PM
back to say congrats to you on your win :) hugs
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Date: 10/19/2019 5:07:00 PM
Well done Craig, nice to see this poem recognized with a fine placement!
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Date: 10/19/2019 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations Craig! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, for I was very strict, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 10/16/2019 1:20:00 AM
Loved this ~ the rhythm and rhyming are impeccable to me, but I love the succintness of your words and story as well. Kudos, craig :)
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Date: 10/13/2019 1:53:00 PM
This is the first time I heard of this form, Craig; thank you for explaining it in simple terms. You have created a dark, chilly atmosphere with apparent ease. I always find the 8/6 syllable count to work remarkably well. Regards // paul
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Craig Cornish
Date: 10/13/2019 3:15:00 PM
Thank you my talented friend
Date: 10/8/2019 9:26:00 AM
I love this one, the form works well with the imagery to set this scene up nicely... to me fog it so eerie in itself, your wording just magnifies it... Excellent penning Craig :) hugs
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Craig Cornish
Date: 10/12/2019 1:29:00 PM
Thank you Sandy!

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