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When Silence Speaks

Today, the doorbell of my mental hideout rang. It rang with a sound like twinkling waterfalls without the moisture, And tweeted like a soft pillow from my 5-year-old camping nest. The scorching glare of darkness crawled up the stairs and seeped Past the crackling summer which was too cold for me. It was a chill that was like purple and green and blue. I went to a hut to produce my own perfume, Scented with exhaustion and misery. There is not much else I can add, the shelves are bare as if A theif came in and out and never came back. When silence finally speaks, it’s time I fall back into my chair, A long forgotten place of rest. It’s not really that sweet, Not really like the sugar leaves stored deep down in my Bluish drawer.

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Date: 5/13/2024 2:49:00 PM
Interesting winner. Congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 5/12/2024 6:00:00 AM
The ramblings of loneliness. Such depth you've expressed, while allowing us to peer into the noise of solitude. Beautifully done...Congrats Joy.
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Date: 5/11/2024 1:20:00 PM
I felt every line. Each. And. Every. Line. my favorite kind of writing.
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Date: 5/7/2024 8:51:00 AM
Dear Joy, your poem creates a picture of solitude and introspection, where the quiet moments become a refuge for the soul. I loved how the wonderful imagery of the doorbell ringing in your mental hideout, accompanied by the twinkling of waterfalls and the softness of a child's pillow, creates a sense of tranquility amidst the chaos of life. May you find renewal in the sanctuary of your thoughts, and may the sweetness of life's simple pleasures bring comfort to your soul. - Blessings, Daniel
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