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When Santa Visited the Elf Inn

When Santa visited The Elf Inn. He was taken quite aback. The landlord said 'Leave now you're barred And don't ever come back.' Santa said 'What is the reason for the ban?' Came the reply 'Last time you were here You drank my sherry and ate the mince pies Then you had the cheek to criticise my beer' Santa said 'To be fair in my defense I only did what a ticker should do And I was really generous Giving that rank ale a two. But the landlord became annoyed And threw Santa out on the street Where he fell upon his bum In the wintery rain and sleet. So Santa went to the Snowman Arms Where his welcome was cheery and warm He even received a kiss on the lips From regular All In Sean.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/14/2016 5:46:00 AM
Congrat. Enjoyable poem and interesting characters. I liked to visit the Elf Inn. Imagery sometimes construes analogies of experience. Actually all your verses (I have visited just some ones, yet) wear a special light.
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:20:00 AM
Your imagery is quite clear and your point well written. Sad how reality bites.
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Date: 2/10/2016 7:21:00 PM
Santa has a life outside of toys, thank you for this humorous glimpse in this wonderful write.
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:16:00 AM
This is nice :)
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:39:00 AM
its more of funny...cool :)
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Date: 2/9/2016 8:13:00 PM
Cool poem...like Dr Seuss.
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Date: 12/29/2015 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:12:00 PM
KEN, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2015 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations Ken.
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Date: 12/28/2015 6:28:00 PM
Nice write Ken.
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Date: 12/26/2015 3:32:00 PM
very amusing Ken! hugs Jan xx
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