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When I Let One Loose In the Elevator

When I let one loose in the elevator I hoped the smell would pass But it stopped on six then my boss stepped in And my bowels expelled more gas He sniffed the air not once but twice And asked if I smelled stew? I answered back with a sheepish grin I think it's butt Fondue August 04 2021

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Lon Wartman

Date: 10/6/2021 5:45:00 AM

I am convinced that we poets need to write more joyful and happy poetry. Thanks so much for sharing your many poems with us. FYI I just published a book called 365 Joyful Poems. I love your work.

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 10/7/2021 3:08:00 PM

Thank you Lon and you are so right. We definitely need more joyful and happy poems to make us smile. Especially during these hard times. Congratulations on publishing your poems. Cheers Anne :-)

Vance Monet

Date: 10/3/2021 3:19:00 PM

Clever

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 10/7/2021 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Vance. I hope it brought a smile to your face. Cheers Anne :-)

Ann Peck

Date: 8/11/2021 2:00:00 PM

HaHa! So funny, Anne! Congratulations on your win!

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/11/2021 3:55:00 PM

Thank you Ann! We all need a good laugh these days. Cheers Anne :-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/11/2021 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Way tooooo funny. Thanks for the laugh. From now on it will be "Fondue." Have a blessed day with your win...............

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/11/2021 11:13:00 AM

Hi Paula, Nice to meet you. Thank you :-) I'm glad you stopped by and enjoyed my poem. It was a fun contest! Cheers Anne :-)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/10/2021 3:10:00 PM

This is a toot sorry I mean a hoot lol Congrats on your win Anne. Tom

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/10/2021 5:05:00 PM

Hi Tom, Nice to meet you. Thank you and congratulations on your win too. Cheers Anne :-)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/9/2021 10:16:00 PM

Having an early morning smile reading about smells in the elevator. Well done and congratulations...Delice

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/10/2021 5:01:00 PM

Hi Delice, Thank you and congratulations on your win too. Cheers Anne :-)

Terry Flood

Date: 8/9/2021 3:27:00 PM

I note with interest that you windy women outnumber us ‘well plugged’ men by two to one. I’m going to start a scientific survey into ‘Duvet flutter’. Congrats on your worthy win, Anne. Terry

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/9/2021 4:47:00 PM

Windy women... Why Sir, what ever do you mean? In my house if the wind rolls through It's always the cat, the dog or husband. ;-D Thank you Terry and congratulations on your win too. Cheers Anne :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2021 2:57:00 PM

Dropping back with many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/9/2021 3:19:00 PM

Hi Jan, Thank you again and congratulations to you too. Hugs Anne :-)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/9/2021 8:55:00 AM

Wonderfully clever rhymes + an original narrative. Congratulations on such a creative entry. Best wishes, Brian

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/9/2021 10:13:00 AM

Hi Brian, Nice to meet you, Thank you for your kind feedback. Cheers Anne :-)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/9/2021 8:30:00 AM

What a laugh out loud that was Anne, congratulations on your top spot win. . Belle

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/9/2021 8:43:00 AM

Hi Belle, Thank you and congratulations on your win too! It was a gas entering this competition. Cheers Anne :-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/9/2021 7:32:00 AM

LOL! Congrats!

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/9/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thank you Kim and congratulations on your win too! A fun write. Cheers Anne :-)

Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/9/2021 7:29:00 AM

Ha, ha, ha, loved it, not the smell, the poem . . . ; )

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/9/2021 7:48:00 AM

Hi Indiana, Lol... Glad to hear you loved it! Cheers Anne :-)

Joanna Feltham

Date: 8/9/2021 6:53:00 AM

Brilliant so very! Congratulations on your winning placement, well deserved.

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/9/2021 7:44:00 AM

Hi Joanna, Nice to meet you. Thank you for your kind feedback and congratulations on your win you too! Cheers Anne :-)

Charles Messina

Date: 8/9/2021 6:20:00 AM

Anne, this is hilarious! Still laughing... Congratulations on your top win in my contest... Hugs Charlie

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/9/2021 7:38:00 AM

Hi Charlie, Nice to meet you. I'm happy to hear you had a good laugh and felt my poem worthy of your top win. Thank you for the honour. It was a fun competition! A few laughs and giggles on the Soup are exactly what the doctor ordered. Cheers my friend Anne :-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/5/2021 11:39:00 AM

Ha, ha, ha, ha! Hilarious! Bottle it and sell it. With 'fondue' on the label, what could go wrong?! lol. Thanks for the laughs, Anne! ~ Gershon

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/5/2021 4:06:00 PM

Hi Gershon, Glad you enjoyed it :-D lol at bottle and sell it! Cheers my friend :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2021 10:27:00 AM

lol:-) the second stanza really made me lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 8/4/2021 10:43:00 AM

Nice to meet you Jan. Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad to hear you got a good laugh at my second stanza. We all need a good laugh these days. Back at you with the hugs :-) Anne xox