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WHEN I AM OLD

When I’m old, I see myself greatly blest As God makes me enjoy His constant grace Propelling my pace to finish life’s race And maximize best years with joyful zest. When I’m old, there am I … still reaching-out Sharing the Saviour’s love with peaceful glow Along prayerful spirit that smites woe Gratefully praise-filled against doubt and pout. When I’m old*, freed from demands of work pain My faith trusts the Lord with triumph-delight Offering accomplishments by His might Midst liberty to wait for heaven’s gain.
*Psalms 71:18 Now also when I am old and greyheaded, O God, forsake me not; until I have shewed thy strength unto this generation, and thy power to every one that is to come. January 20, 2025 10th place, "When You Are Old" Rhyme Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Sara Kendrick; judged on 1/21/2025

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Date: 2/7/2025 12:09:00 PM
I am 80 years old, thus I can attest; Almighty God gets sweeter and sweeter as the days go by! Indeed, He is faithfully keeping every promise He has made(Isa 46:3-5)! Wonderful! Love, Blessings and Faith...
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Date: 1/24/2025 10:26:00 AM
Nice composition... You seem to be deeply religious...
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Date: 1/21/2025 8:55:00 PM
Beautifully written poem. How I wish to have this sort of a graceful aging. Placed high or not, I must say this is a great entry. Congratulations, Beata!
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Date: 1/21/2025 2:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. Way to go. Your faith-based work is always delightful. Thank you for your participation. Sara K
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Date: 1/21/2025 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Great Ending you have here. Love how you added Psalms on the bottom... Have a blessed day with your win as you write away.................
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Date: 1/21/2025 6:56:00 AM
I admire your deep faith, Beata!
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