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When Forever Calls

And when forever calls my name To leave the garden of my life For one last stroll along the path For one last look at what I’ve grown I’ll smile with happiness and joy For every flower that I see Each one a symbol of the love Of every person that I’ve known Perhaps grandmother’s yellow rose To start my journey’s reverie Will be in blossom once again So beautiful in every way For friends, the daffodils I count So many I am blessed to see My family, sunflowers bear To celebrate this special day Though bittersweet to say goodbye As earthly flowers ebb and flow Believing in great love ahead I’ll know that it is time to go

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Date: 6/18/2024 2:45:00 AM
Looking back at the beauty you are leaving behind you. And your descriptions are of high degree.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2024 3:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor !!!
Date: 6/18/2024 12:23:00 AM
"Though bittersweet to say goodbye As earthly flowers ebb and flow Believing in great love ahead I’ll know that it is time to go" - A very beautiful poem. Though it's a free verse, it has music. Great work.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2024 3:55:00 AM
Thank you smooch Christuraj!!!
Date: 6/17/2024 3:09:00 PM
Excellent poem Mike. Your gratitude and love shine through! Very well done. Happy Monday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2024 3:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi xxoo
Date: 6/17/2024 2:10:00 PM
Utterly and completely glorious poem Mike honestly! I just love it! Any special flowers in your beautiful garden for your poet friends hehe!! Debx
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Deb M
Date: 6/17/2024 4:32:00 PM
Oh…l like your new avatar!! Debx

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