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#1 When I am wrapped with a feeling of ecstasy vulnerability of the sea - side to side, overboard, dismount

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Date: 4/8/2025 11:15:00 PM
Shows in your writing. :) A breathlessness you invoke in your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/9/2025 6:58:00 AM
Thank you kindly!
Date: 4/4/2025 2:17:00 PM
So witty and fun, Kim! Thank you for sharing. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2025 2:33:00 PM
Thank you for saying so! Hugs
Date: 4/3/2025 3:51:00 PM
never insist with ecstasy, i feel unconfortable too, nicely done dear poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2025 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, Yann :)
Date: 4/3/2025 11:26:00 AM
- Now I understand ... to me it sounds like you're seasick (I didn't understand ... dismount :))) - Excellent writing :) - Best wishes in the contest, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2025 12:23:00 PM
LOL...I edited so people would see the prompt...seahorse (in comments) what's that about?
Date: 4/3/2025 10:19:00 AM
I prefer keeping my feet on the ground Kim, wish you well in the contest. xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2025 11:07:00 AM
The prompt was "When I am wrapped with a feeling of ecstasy"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2025 11:02:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/3/2025 2:16:00 AM
A real trained horse would not let you down. A sea horse will.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2025 5:45:00 AM
Your comment makes me smile ;) Hugs
Date: 4/2/2025 9:56:00 PM
I think I detect a 'seahorse' here, Kim. ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2025 5:46:00 AM
LOL!

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