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What Life Teaches

Life teaches many a valuable truth, That makes our existence one of worth. Graying and growing old is no curse, As experience directs life’s course. See life as a mysterious puzzle, And death as an inexorable struggle. Know, hatred burns life like fire, And wickedness turns it into mire. On Earth, forgiveness bonds hearts But revenge, sure, every bond thwarts Even the guilty falls prostrate, Before those willing to commiserate. Know, a true friend has no deceit, And a truly learned has no conceit. If jealousy is an acid which erodes, Generosity is a fuel that reloads. If inactivity is akin to death, Creativity is vital as breath. If perseverance conquers mountains Laziness dries up fountains. While pride leads a man to his fall Humility takes him closer to his goal. While Honesty leads him to salvation Deceit drives him to damnation. Patience is an inexhaustible well, And perversion, a sure road to hell. Know, those who long for the crown, Should also be torn by the thorn. While love of God takes us to eternity, Love of man leads us to fraternity. With such priceless tips learned in bits, Let us light up our life in glowing glitz. May we bury our past with all its blues, As each morn of hope brightly blooms! May. 6. 2023 ~ Placed First~ Couplet Poetry Contest Sponsor- Sotto Poet

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Date: 8/21/2023 2:52:00 AM
It is a beautiful poem showing all the era of our lives in a beautiful manner .
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Date: 5/18/2023 10:47:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Valsa ... the two last lines say it all ... - hugs
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Date: 5/18/2023 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in the Contest...Dear Valsa... Nice lesson.
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Date: 5/17/2023 12:00:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you, and belated Happy Mother's day.
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Date: 5/16/2023 10:11:00 PM
WoW! Valsa, Your well-written couplets are filled with much wisdom. Congratulation on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great evening-Alexis
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Date: 5/16/2023 7:37:00 PM
Very powerful couplets. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/16/2023 11:39:00 AM
Valsa, your writing is excellent and descriptive. Your victorious couplet in my contest deserves earnest acclaim. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/16/2023 7:16:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Lasaad for picking up my poem for a first place win. I am glad I got the opportunity to take part in your contest
Date: 5/10/2023 3:16:00 PM
Really loved reading this couplet poem. So clever and especially found the last couplet so inspiring. Thought provoking words of wisdom. Thank you
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Date: 5/7/2023 11:45:00 AM
Valsa, this is a magnificent poem--a treasury of wise gems that are meaningful individually and collectively. Janice
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Date: 5/7/2023 4:38:00 AM
Every pair adorned with wisdom and virtue. The message of your poem resonates from start to finish, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 5/7/2023 1:35:00 AM
A very positive poem, Valsa. Enjoyed reading it. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/6/2023 8:19:00 PM
'A true friend has no deceit // a truly learned no conceit' -- my favorite of all these couplets. Pearls of wisdom, indeed, Valsa. Thank you for all the timely reminders! ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/6/2023 4:12:00 PM
Love it, very true wisdom and knowledge to dwell on , amazing poem you have put together, thanks for sharing your beautiful gift with us all : )
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Date: 5/6/2023 2:16:00 PM
Beautiful message and wording, Valsa! You're right on!
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Date: 5/6/2023 1:52:00 PM
whoa..hold those horses girl. This is so very, very good Valsa. I don't know how you rhymed all those wonderful character attributes. It's amazing..
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Date: 5/6/2023 5:55:00 AM
Hi Valsa. Your couplets make so many wise points. I enjoyed each one, but this one offers advice to all who seek power, Know, those who long for the crown, Should also be torn by the thorn.
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