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Weeping Girl

Your tears do not become your eyes. Would my guitar weep in their stead to drench and drown the shade that tries, and charm a smile when woe has fled, the fingers of my restless hands would dance to soothing sarabands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/2/2021 11:27:00 AM
Beautifully leads me dancing through the sadness. Thanks for sharing Terry.
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Date: 8/16/2019 6:13:00 PM
Very beautiful, Terry!
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Date: 10/28/2012 7:41:00 PM
I see how you win so many contest. You have a natural talent at this and it keeps getting better with time.
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Date: 7/15/2012 9:05:00 AM
Hi Terry, really lovely and well done on coming first in the contest!!! xx <3
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Date: 6/5/2012 10:26:00 PM
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Date: 6/5/2012 10:23:00 PM
Her loving minstrel strums his guitar with the music of minuets to soothe her wounded soul, dry her tears and once again to her face return a smile. How lovely this is. Huggs TLee
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Date: 6/5/2012 8:45:00 AM
Terry - Sarabands sent me right to the dictionary. You are a charming bard. love, Kathy
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:31:00 PM
TERRY, IT'S ALWAYS NICE TO SEE YOUR WINNING POEMS,, CONGRATS IN BRIAN'S CONTEST... XOX~PD
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:47:00 PM
A win poem....agree in that....congrats Terry, well done. - hug to you.
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:26:00 PM
nice write,Terry
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Date: 6/2/2012 1:30:00 PM
Congrats Terry on your win. TLee
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Date: 6/1/2012 7:24:00 PM
wow, I sure enjoyed the flow of this one, Terry. As Debs said here, dreamy!
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Date: 6/1/2012 7:24:00 PM
Also I see it won a contest. I don't know which one, but CONGRATS to you! Was it Brian's contest?
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Date: 6/1/2012 2:17:00 PM
Just dreamy I love to see this birthed into a sonnet ;) [excellent meter too!] Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:54:00 PM
Terry congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/1/2012 11:22:00 AM
Lovely....Tanya
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Date: 6/1/2012 5:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win Terry! This id excellent!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 5/31/2012 1:09:00 PM
Wonderful!Congrats!
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Date: 5/31/2012 12:44:00 PM
wow WOW very good speachless
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Date: 5/31/2012 12:13:00 PM
on top of the heap with this stunning read, terry.. congrats all the way!..:) huggs!
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Date: 5/31/2012 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the #180 contest Terry. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2012 9:43:00 AM
Terry, well done, excellent meter..David
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Date: 5/31/2012 8:57:00 AM
A nice piece!!
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