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There is beauty in your absence     there is greatness in your silence there is pain in your wishes      In your innards, there are dreams Poetry and you are synonymous     I am synonymous with love how I love you both.       Poetry is a susurrus that tickles the nooks       and crannies of resourcefulness every recourse, every nook       and cranny, and life itself the shadow lives inside me       an almost flawless replica. It moves when she moves          smiles when she smiles all is well, a shadow says          shadows from the past stretch longer when the sun sets.           Weaning from the breast of grief and tears         becomes starker and harsher Mother, you are long gone         yet in the fading light I suckle on your memories. 5th place contest winner Written: January 28, 2023 Your Pick Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/30/2023 8:05:00 PM
"Mother, you are long gone yet in the fading light I suckle on your memories." Beautiful lines and beautiful poem with a great title. Congratulations dear Lasaad on your great win.
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Date: 1/30/2023 2:20:00 PM
So well expressed in poetically merging the love of a mother with the beauty + power of verse. Sublime. Many congratulations, Brian
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Date: 1/29/2023 11:13:00 AM
An engrossing poem, with wonderful imagery. Best wishes for the contest, my friend.
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Date: 1/29/2023 6:40:00 AM
Splendid write my friend. Opening stanza is a fabulous start to rest of your poem.
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Date: 1/28/2023 11:01:00 PM
Great emotive sensations. Best for a win.
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