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Waves of Blue

Waves drifting toward rocky peaks, unchained, fresh with salty breeze kissing my cheek. Wish you were here to feel the wonder of it all, to linger softly along shores of love and star light nights. With the air I breathe, you'll always be their in mind, you have touched my heart deeply with promise. Waters blue, I sit upon a cliff, gazing as far as eyes can see, an ocean filled with mystery. I lay my soul to rest, where I'm inspired by God and nature, he has given me much to enjoy, I've found, captured, I've locked it all within.. (Now I Drift To You) By Derena © 2018 Derena (All rights reserved)

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Date: 3/17/2018 11:08:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and splendid emotion is expressed in your lovey introspective poem Harriet of appreciation and coming to inner peace. I love your dreamy last line! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:44:00 PM
OH, I just adore that last line , NOw i drift to you. You are a good writer! I am not sure if I commented to you before, but I came down here to see your first poem. Now I will answer you about publishing. I have been in many anthologies and magazines with other poet friends. I've self published 8 chapbooks all out of print now. I've been writing since 2000. How about you?
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Date: 3/12/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thank you Silent One..My mind is made of imagination.. Hugs--Harriet
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Date: 3/12/2018 7:34:00 AM
Great first post, I enjoyed the imagery in this one..
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Date: 3/7/2018 8:55:00 AM
What a beautiful image... nicely done! I really enhoyed this poem.
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Harriet Shea
Date: 3/7/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Edward..I am happy you enjoyed; Hugs Derena
Date: 3/5/2018 2:56:00 PM
Beautiful imagery - I truly enjoyed this
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:56:00 AM
A veey beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed reading it, you re right we ahould always be happy in what God has given us, especially because this life is only a test, it s to test us and to see whether we pass it or not, if we manage to pass it and earn our salvation, Gardners of heaven are waiting for us
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Date: 3/7/2018 6:33:00 PM
Your so very right. Thank you so much.. Hugs, Derena
Date: 3/1/2018 4:13:00 AM
Acceptance, peace, and appreciation are some of the words I felt as I read your poem...Lovely imagery too...All the best Harriet
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Harriet Shea
Date: 3/1/2018 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much. I am so happy you enjoyed my write..Derena is my writing name. Harriet

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