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Waiting For Spring Haiku

Sullen lead tendrils embrace emeralds brought by periwinkle skies.

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Date: 2/16/2010 5:00:00 PM

Love the idea of "perwinkle skies." Interesting perspective for the reader to reflect on. Nice use of imagery. Keep that pen flowing. Thank you for stopping by to comment. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2010 4:19:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/26/2010 10:23:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest Gerard. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/26/2010 9:21:00 AM

Brilliant images of spring emerging, Gerard! Best of luck in Carol's contest with this great entry. Love, carolyn