Vices

VICES Various types, kinds of vices are destructive, very bad. The person’s views are changed, distorted, virtues warped, life becomes vicious cycle and dreams vanish in the thin air. 5/5/21 Pleiades V Poetry Kim Merryman Checked: How Many Syllables

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/9/2021 6:56:00 PM

Congratulations!

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/9/2021 7:11:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim. Have a good evening.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2021 4:16:00 PM

well done and congratulations

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/9/2021 4:43:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Happy Mother's Day. Enjoy the rest of your day.

Joseph May

Date: 5/8/2021 4:08:00 PM

So true Marilene, Congrats on your win

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/8/2021 4:14:00 PM

Thanks, so much, Joseph. Have a good week-end.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/8/2021 11:28:00 AM

I like the way you described how vices change a person. Well done! Congrats on your win, Marilene! Blessings, Kim M

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/8/2021 12:21:00 PM

Thank you. Thank you, Kim. My second husband was an alcoholic, so sweet and kind; but when he was binging, he forgot his family, so I had to say goodbye.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2021 11:27:00 AM

- One of my favorites, Marilene :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/8/2021 12:17:00 PM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Have a great week-end.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/7/2021 11:39:00 PM

Congratulations!

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/8/2021 8:47:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj. Have a great day.