Up In Heaven

Someone whispered once to me You see up there, up there we’re free We cannot see it or know its gate But it’s from down here we live to wait And when its time, our time to go Up there to heaven is where we’ll blow Towards the light, our spirits shall ride To a magical heaven where hierarchies abide Its spiritual radiance of all that is calm A place of celestial divinity as sited in psalms Just perfect and beautiful and gloriously pure With magnificent colours that heal all obscured Souls of the past of future of present Working together in love light and inerrant With unicorns and Angels and all that is free And one day amongst them soon to be me. 26 August 2018 Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/26/2019 3:43:00 PM

A nice heavenly piece Francesca, nicely penned indeed as its always good to think on heaven. Blessings, Gordon

Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 7/15/2019 1:08:00 PM

Thank you again, Gordon. Greatly appreciated :)

Charles Messina

Date: 12/1/2018 7:05:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Francesca. A true gem for sure! I also wrote a poem called "Up in Heaven" but much different than yours. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Very nice to meet you as well. Happy Holidays and many blessings...Charlie

Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 12/3/2018 3:25:00 AM

Really appreciate it, Charlie. Many Thanks for your message :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2018 5:53:00 PM

I am so glad to see you on this list with this gem. Congratulations.

Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 9/21/2018 5:14:00 AM

Thank you so very much Andrea for your support as always :) xxx

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 9/19/2018 3:08:00 AM

This is a wonderful poem with a nice flow and beautiful imagery, I absolutely love reading it, many congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 9/21/2018 5:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Faraz. Really appreciate it :)