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Unwanted Love

Unwanted love, like constipation, a pain in the ass It will upset you for many days Once dumped, system cleared, the trouble will pass You’ll be able to go your separate ways

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/20/2010 11:41:00 AM
Haha. Brilliant! Better out the rear than out the front i always say. Love it! Thanks for your comment on my poem Estranged Love. Best wishes... Taha
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Date: 10/19/2010 4:57:00 PM
hahaha! As Sara said below, 'One way to put it'... I enjoyed this..in a way, Sidney lol...I like directness- Goes to my favs.! Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/18/2010 3:51:00 PM
One way to put it..Sara
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Date: 10/18/2010 11:27:00 AM
(: Cool poem
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:57:00 PM
Well this is an interesting form Sidney and your lines are funny yet true..luv.. nice play on words as only u can do .. enjoyed tonight with luv..
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Date: 10/17/2010 7:20:00 PM
very amusing and sort of wise !!take care~Deb
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Date: 10/17/2010 5:50:00 PM
enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 10/17/2010 5:20:00 PM
so funny!! those caterpillars that can shoot poop out the rectum comes to mind. wouldn't be great to just blow 'em out the rear? when some one hurts you or is unwanted.
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Date: 10/17/2010 5:18:00 PM
lol. I like it!
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