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Unshackled Musing

Freedom to think, freedom to give' Can't pay for Love Why do we wrangle and sieve? From scales, un-shown we'll never learn Within prisons of opinions Our sensibiltys so burn.' Offerings of idols, some eat it up.? Oh so many ape and preen! When will we see? We bought a pup? Can humanity ever leave this shore? On-load raise a sail strong and sure.' Sharing valid resources, good lore; and more.'

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John Lawless

Date: 8/15/2024 2:51:00 PM

what good is it to be unshackled if you are still inside the box

Joe Maverick
Date: 8/15/2024 10:46:00 PM

Well raised John.' I think its only A cardboard box with bricks Painted on it though?? And they are Just relying on humans complying.!!

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/15/2024 2:45:00 PM

Small sail ship in storms...big ocean liners. Watching birds fly and dreaming...to rockets. But nothing has changed in the heart of man, still a spirit inclined toward clubs and shields. What must Christ think? Thought provoking write my friend.

Joe Maverick
Date: 8/15/2024 10:44:00 PM

He knows of what we are made Joe Dimino and He is and will Refine us to His will.!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2024 2:21:00 PM

Creative work. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Joe Maverick
Date: 8/15/2024 10:42:00 PM

Hello Sara..Great to get your Thoughts.!!

Vilmos Zoltan Galyo

Date: 8/15/2024 2:17:00 PM

Very nice poem! Congratulations!

Joe Maverick
Date: 8/15/2024 10:41:00 PM

Thank you for commtnting Vilmos!