Unfocused

Is it just me or A.D.D. Can’t stay on top of things When the sermon gets long I mentally write a poem I must fight to stay focused Least the devil do hocus pocus

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Itumeleng Cangua

Date: 2/7/2025 8:03:00 PM

Lovely

Karen Jones
Date: 2/8/2025 2:39:00 AM

Thanks!

Kathleen Hassall

Date: 1/26/2025 8:35:00 PM

I can very much relate. Just this morning in church, this happened. I do think God understands when inspiration hits! Nice poem!

Karen Jones
Date: 1/27/2025 12:08:00 AM

I’m happy God is forgiving! Thanks for your kind comment Kathleen!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2025 6:51:00 PM

Abba cadabra and Holy Moly. ~ The Devil in Miss Jones

Karen Jones
Date: 1/27/2025 12:07:00 AM

Not in me just f’ing with me Gershon! Lol

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/26/2025 1:15:00 PM

ha! i can totally relate to those "mental poems," karen - the trick is to get them down on paper, which i'm glad you've done here...

Karen Jones
Date: 1/26/2025 1:39:00 PM

lol thanks Ilene for understanding!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/26/2025 9:17:00 AM

So true; occasionally, we are distracted. Can't be helped.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/26/2025 11:03:00 AM

Hugs Victor!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2025 8:35:00 AM

What a creative "Unfocused" write you have here. No hocus pocus for you. Hooray!!! Devil stay far away... Have a blessed day as you write away..................

Karen Jones
Date: 1/26/2025 9:04:00 AM

Paula thanks and have a blessed day writing as well!