Home » Poems » Dakarai Cobb » Uncompromising

Uncompromising

Understanding what kind of man Never allows himself to lose Control of his very own views Or change his very own game plan, Manage your life so that you can Possess control of your own news, Regardless of if others bruise Or refuse to become your fan. Make the best decisions for you, In a way that puts you on top. Stop thinking about what they do! Instead, move forward with no stops! Notice the goals within your view! Go, and take harvest of your crops!

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2011 7:17:00 PM

wow,you are king of those acrostic type italian sonnets for sure!! Keep it up, Dakarai!

Dakarai Cobb
Date: 5/11/2011 9:20:00 AM

thank you for that compliment Andrea. All that I am trying to do is challenge myself to become a better writer. At some point, I would love to do this for a living. So, I have to keep coming up with ideas that would make people want to read me.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/10/2011 10:46:00 AM

ooops, you;re the sponsor. lol... i am still doing mine for you.. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/10/2011 10:44:00 AM

great sense of "breathing" in this piece, dak! best winning wishes..:) huggs, nette

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 5/10/2011 7:52:00 AM

I am looking forward to reading the acrostic, italian sonnets that were entered in my contest. Thank you all for making my first contest experience an enjoyable one. Take care Poetry Soup.