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Unbalanced

Given too many responsibilities rightly belonging to others....stumbling under their weight

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2023 2:02:00 AM

- A great line, Jeanne :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -

Jeanne Hicks
Date: 10/17/2023 7:04:00 AM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2023 11:07:00 AM

I hate that feeling. HOpe it gets better. Congrats to you.

Jeanne Hicks
Date: 10/16/2023 3:46:00 PM

Thank you

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 8:24:00 AM

This was a clever one.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Jeanne Hicks
Date: 10/15/2023 11:15:00 AM

Thank you

Karen Jones

Date: 10/12/2023 3:45:00 PM

This is unfair to anyone. But especially to kids or teens who become second moms or like parents to siblings while parents are unavailable routinely. They sacrifice childhood and teen years.

Jeanne Hicks
Date: 10/12/2023 4:03:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comment