Two Adverbs & a Pronoun

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Richard Pickett

Date: 1/1/2010 8:56:00 AM

Niccceee Brian, Very good write. All the good stuff we use daily...Happy New Year and thanks for commenting on my work...God Bless...Taz

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/23/2009 8:44:00 PM

awwww funny one here handsome! Light & Love

Marty Owens

Date: 12/23/2009 9:21:00 AM

Very cute poem...Enjoyed...Marty

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/23/2009 8:40:00 AM

Clever and fun poem!! I tanka....rather, I Thank you once more, Brian, for selecting my poem in your contest...and especially for the many challenges you have sponsored, the encouragment and inspiratiion during this past year. I'm so grateful for all the support. Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/23/2009 4:25:00 AM

Wonderful as always and your words are so cool... luv the last line ... unique... I want to say "thankxxx" for choosing my poem as a winner in your Christmas Parlous Poetry contest Brian... it means so much to me to tackle poetry I have never written before and to be named a winner with a new form.. u have taught me so expertly and I so appreciate your expertise'.. congrats to all the winners of the contest also.. happy holidays... holy holidays... luv Linda-Marie...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/23/2009 4:17:00 AM

Interesting write. Keep the educational pen flowing. Sara