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two starlings at bath female goes in, male watches..... invasive species

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Date: 9/18/2024 9:16:00 AM
so hard to get a bit of privacy ~
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/18/2024 2:12:00 PM
Oh!! funny..Even in the bird species. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 9/12/2024 4:22:00 AM
Dear Sara, What a wonderful Haiku with a nice twist to it. I love it when my mind thinks one thing when I start reading and then changes at the end. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/12/2024 7:55:00 AM
Yes, Daniel, that does add a whole new dimension to the work plus to one's thinking. They say that they are an invasive species who will take over an area where they find easy food and water. I hope they were just searching for water and won't be back. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara K
Date: 9/10/2024 1:23:00 PM
though realistic, this is areal witty 'ku as well , sara... awesome penning!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/10/2024 1:36:00 PM
Nette, I am so delighted that everyone got a laugh out of it. Thank you for the nice review of my work. Sara K
Date: 9/10/2024 12:30:00 PM
you wrote what you saw and did it so well..
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/10/2024 1:35:00 PM
SO, sometimes seeing is believing. Sara K
Date: 9/10/2024 11:04:00 AM
Made me smile, Sara! Nicely done and very lyrical! Blessings and prayers!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/10/2024 1:34:00 PM
Why, thank you, Sam. I need all the blessings and prayers I can get. Sare K
Date: 9/10/2024 10:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write with a great picture. Guess it was bath time... Have a fun day writing away...............
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/10/2024 1:34:00 PM
I am delighted you enjoyed it. It has been an interesting day. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 9/10/2024 8:40:00 AM
Typical male, doesn't want to wash lol. Tom
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/10/2024 1:33:00 PM
Ha, ha...Tom, thanks for the laughter you added. Sara K
Date: 9/10/2024 8:29:00 AM
very witty poem. Enjoyed
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/10/2024 1:32:00 PM
Thank you for the nice review of my work. Sara K
Date: 9/10/2024 7:15:00 AM
LOL…good humor!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/10/2024 8:02:00 AM
Glad you got a laugh. Sara K

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