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Twirling Pearl

There once was a girl named Pearl. Her baton she loved to twirl. She tossed it too high, and it hit her guy. He can no longer give her a whirl.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/19/2020 7:30:00 PM

Ha, ha! Cute one. I like 'em funny and clean. This limerick succeeds on both counts. Thanks, Gershon

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/22/2020 12:49:00 PM

It can be a challenge to get it right. But not really sure until you get a comment. Glad it hit the mark. Thank you, Gershon

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/19/2020 2:16:00 PM

How high is high? I mean, did it hit God? That is a bad scene! Aloha! Rico

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/19/2020 4:43:00 PM

I think it just fell short of God, thank God! A bad scene indeed. Thank you Rico! Aloha!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/18/2020 9:12:00 PM

When Pearl’s baton struck her guy, It gave him an awful black eye. Now gone is she, Into history, With not even a kiss goodbye. Belle

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/19/2020 9:35:00 AM

I like it! Great limerick! Thanks for sharing.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/18/2020 3:48:00 PM

LOL Great one Sandy! :)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/18/2020 4:35:00 PM

Thank you, it was fun.