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Twilight Dreams

Into twilight dreams Love expands beyond our soul For I sleep for you. Haiku...5/7/5 June.12.2017 Premiere haiku - Contest Sponsored by: Chris D. Aechtner

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/5/2017 3:33:00 PM

WW it looks like the cartoon person is having a nightmare.Yet I see a person dreaming of love while you sleep.Have a nice day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2017 3:34:00 PM

This was a great read and I loved the picture going with it.

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/13/2017 9:36:00 PM

Those twilight dreams seem to be taking a beating in the picture, is that where the expanding part kicks In? Good luck in the contest WW

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 6/13/2017 1:30:00 PM

Wow, love this haiku. Good luck in the contest WW

Chris Green

Date: 6/13/2017 9:13:00 AM

This was beautiful and enchanting and such a nice poem to read this morning. Thank you sharing this small but wonderful piece of love with us.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/13/2017 3:46:00 AM

Good Morning Winged Warrior. This entry is lovely. I love the title. Your words enhance it. You bring life to the Haiku format. Well done in form theme voice and tone. Best of luck with the contest.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/12/2017 10:27:00 PM

Amazing Haiku, and the photo goes so well!

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/12/2017 7:25:00 PM

Clever haiku, WW. Good luck old friend:)

White Wolf

Date: 6/12/2017 5:34:00 PM

Oh, this is really good! Well done and best of luck!