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For Contest, The Night Before-4 sponsored by Joesph May Nov.2024 It's supposed to be a funny Christmas story, and I think there are a couple funny lines but it turned out a bit dramatic instead...oops!
Twas the night before Christmas… …And I finally sat down, After last minute shopping, running all over town. Deciding to rest now, I opened my phone To visit the Soup and read a few poems. As soon as I pulled up the soup’s website, My home disappeared in a brilliant white light! Suddenly I was in a large room, Packed with all my neighbors from PoetrySoup! They were just as shocked as I seemed to be, Then a loud voice said, “your attention please!” On a stage, stood a man I did not know, “ I'm here to explain why you're here," his face aglow… "There is a great need that only you can fill. You see, Santa needs a new Christmas song or he'll… …Go insane, go crazy, just be a total fruit cake, If he hears the same Christmas songs and remakes! Over and over, year after year, he listens to the same songs, the poor dear. So Santa called me! yes, the man himself, And asked me to gather my best poets to help. Using his magic we were able to arrange This impromptu gathering though it is strange. Each of you here are the best of the best! (Well except Crystol, she's just here to attest.)" [There were some poets that I didn't know, But if you're reading this, you were there for the show! So Santa asked us to write a new song… A masterpiece poem and not very long.] The man continued, "He'd like it to be about his sainthood, All that he's done, the great and the good. Praise him for the miracles he's done and will do. (I'll bet you get the best gifts when you're through!)" There was a shocked silence all around the room, Some shuffling feet, awkwardness loomed. Then we all went to sit around a table, calling out ideas for this lyrical fable. There was a bit of infighting among the guests. These poets' personalities clashed, I confess. One man held court explaining he doesn't even partake, "In pagan celebrations, For heaven's sake!" Another that claimed the birthday was wrong… “Jesus was born in September…put that in your song!” Then a sweet lady spoke up, “let's just have fun! But please don't forget proper punctuation!” “Wait, said another, we need to be sure these words suggested aren't AI #@!( she swore ).” Yes, they all had their own preferences and ways, But eventually worked together, this job they essayed. Then someone stood, he said, “um…if I might? Sorry to interrupt, but this doesn't feel right. Santa is a fun, even sweet, part of Christmas. But the reason for it all, I think, will be missed! If we write a song as he asked us to do, The meaning of the holiday will never come through… Christmas is about goodness and love, about giving, the spirit of peace connecting us. It's not about how much we get or what Santa Claus does. Most of all Christmas is about Jesus!” Everyone nodded and they had to agree… They may have different faith and beliefs but Christmas is about love and peace! They crumpled their papers and threw them away! And in a few minutes their Christmas song came! Santa was able to stop in on his way through, Delivering presents but he had time to... ...stop in and read the song we all wrote. As we looked on, our eyes filled with hope. He read , his brow lowered, his smile began to fade… And his face turned pink,then red in assumed rage! But when Santa looked up from the lyrics he read, Tears fell from his eyes and Santa Claus said, “I really thought the time had finally come when all of mankind was lost… everyone! But you've passed my test, you beautiful group! The spirit of Christmas is alive in the Soup!”

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Date: 12/23/2024 2:35:00 PM
Great news that Santa liked our poems! I confess to being a bit worried about that - lol!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/25/2024 4:47:00 PM
Ha! Of course he did! Ty David for reading xo
Date: 11/23/2024 4:21:00 PM
I enjoyed this, very imaginative Crystol.....The first two lines of stanza 11 really jumped out at me.....not only is Jesus the reason for the season, He is the reason for reason. Glory to the King of saints.
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Michael Ramel
Date: 11/25/2024 1:33:00 PM
Yes I have heard that about Zechariah that he was high priest around September. I appreciate you broaching the subject. I also appreciate that you are a Christian and take the time to expound on your view. Praise Jesus.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/23/2024 4:42:00 PM
Yess amen! Is that something you've understood in your Bible studies too... about September? I learned that while studying John the Baptist s father in Luke... he was a levitical priest and served at temple in the course of abiah... if you study what that means you can figure the date in relation to Elizabeth's pregnancy compared to Mary's. However, he was still conceived around the time of Christmas so it's not that much of a stretch to celebrate then! Sry i got lecturing lol! Ty for your comments!! Xo
Date: 11/23/2024 12:06:00 PM
Dear Crystol, oh how you have beautifully captured the magic and chaos of Christmas! I love how you blend humor with a profound message about love and togetherness. Your creativity inspires me deeply as I enjoyed the joyful journey! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/23/2024 4:45:00 PM
Ty so much Daniel! I guess I've got a theme going now with poetry soup lol... but yall are such an important part of my life now! Ty for coming by to encourage! Xo
Date: 11/23/2024 9:54:00 AM
Kinda like how a camel was designed. We know the singular reason for the season, CW. Clever, cute, chicken dinner winner!. :op))
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/23/2024 4:46:00 PM
You are simply singular Arlo Parker! Love it¡¡¡ thank you so much and God bless! Xo
Date: 11/23/2024 12:23:00 AM
Love these Night before Christmas poems Crystol, the longer the better, I think the original had 16 stanzas. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/23/2024 6:15:00 AM
They are so fun I agree! God luck to u if you're participating! I'll take a look at your page...xo
Date: 11/22/2024 6:06:00 PM
A wonderful Christmas story/poem Crystol, enjoyed the read very much, that last line is fantastic… Beryl
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/23/2024 6:14:00 AM
Ty Beryl! So glad you enjoyed it! Xo
Date: 11/22/2024 12:09:00 PM
Ha! I'm the guy in stanza #10
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/24/2024 8:39:00 AM
Yess God sees the heart and intentions ultimately. I hope yall have a happy Thanksgiving too Tom and Keith! Full of family, good food, and love! Xo
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/23/2024 5:33:00 PM
Sorry, my bad! I was responding to Tommy’s comments but I am really responding to everyone. I get the whole Easter thing with the bunnies and the eggs but that’s really for the kids. Christmas and Easter are a magical time (or should be) for them. I’m sure some pagan practices were incorporated back in antiquity by the church to try and convert the pagans to Christianity. I think the Catholic Church is a prime example of that but the acknowledgment of the birth and death of Jesus I think is a good thing. Happy Thanksgiving.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/23/2024 5:18:00 PM
I have a fictional story I wrote titled: Why I don't celebrate Christmas. It has some interesting Scriptural points
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/23/2024 4:59:00 PM
Are you asking me Keith? I believe the Christmas traditions we've adopted come from Pagan practises but that is so often the case with many things. After all The one God was not widely preached to the Gentiles nations(people other than Isrealites) until after Jesus ascended. So I'm careful not to focus on traditions but on Christ. The only holiday i do not participate in is Easter. It has taken the place of the Passover which was commanded we keep it forever. Jesus became our Passover but we should still not replace that with bunnies and eggs which are symbols of fertility to the goddess Ishtar. But that is a personal decision and I don't judge others on what they choose to do... because i don't know everything and learn something new everyday!! Ty for commenting! Romans 14 <3 xo
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/23/2024 3:10:00 PM
Having said that, I see the true spirit of Christmas and appreciation of its meaning lost on a generation of kids who probably have no idea who Jesus is.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/23/2024 3:02:00 PM
I would argue Santa is not a pagan appropriation but a legacy of Nicholas of Myra who did wonderful deeds of charity. The tree also is widely regarded to have come from Martin Luther, a Protestant priest, who cut one down for his home and lit with candles to cheer his family up during a cold winter season. There are many theories for all these things but anything that celebrates the birth of Christ and promotes peace and joy is a thing to be cherished and protected methinks.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/23/2024 5:24:00 AM
Haha Keith never know when you're serious but yes it's modeled after the Roman Saturnalia and everything from the tree to the yule log to mistletoe has its roots in heathendom. For a fascinating study compare Odin to Santa. I found at least 10 similarities
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/22/2024 10:11:00 PM
Do you believe Christmas is a pagan celebration? Askin for a friend of a friend.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/22/2024 6:06:00 PM
You're always so sweet
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/22/2024 2:19:00 PM
This is an inclusive group after all! All our thoughts and beliefs are valid <3<3
Date: 11/22/2024 11:53:00 AM
Wonderful writing Crystol you certainly put your heart and soul into this one. xx
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/22/2024 2:19:00 PM
Thanks John! I had fun writing this! Xo

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