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Treasure Me

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It was suggested that I place my photo here.

I am not one to place my photo with poems.

I understand how the reader wishes to see who is behind the words.

Sand sweeps over, as the sweet salty air tickles every part of my being, tracing curves Temptation can be overwhelming, for someone like you Seek and you shall find beyond the surface Even a grown man likes to get dirty, play lost and found It’s like Maturity takes a rest from reality, and you become as a child Trust me when I say “I want to connect the dots with you too” A game perhaps, but I am willing to seize the moment However I wonder how long the wait will be - - even someone like me, needs setting free Seek and you shall find, unravel the mystery Of course I like knowing you could hold me, like a whisper gentle as the wind, never letting go Still, I wait for you because X marks the spot, and a man will not ask for directions The sweet salty air moves over my tender form How long will it be, until you find and, Treasure Me _______________________ Something a little Playful

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Running Wolves

Date: 12/31/2019 11:49:00 AM

Oh my this is what every man longs for, to be truly wanted, loved, and needed but in a healthy way...Siiigh... Happy new year may all your dreams be fulfilled. Be safe, be blessed always

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/31/2019 3:35:00 PM

Your thoughts make me blush. Every man longs for this, do they? Oh my!!! I am smiling. :) Thank you for such a wonderful comment and compliment. Happy New Year to you. Many blessings. :) Brandy

Silent One

Date: 11/17/2019 2:23:00 PM

you do not have to put your photo up if you do not want to... just look at me... lol.. we all want to be found and treasured.. a lovely poem...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/17/2019 6:48:00 PM

Just look at you? I can't see you. :) Maybe one day, you will share your photo. Thank you Silent One. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Old Buck

Date: 7/14/2019 4:27:00 PM

Brandy: I'm an old fella and stuff like this gets my heart racing at dangerous levels. My romantic stuff is pretty much summed up in my work : One of Life's Treasures. I believe it is at the bottom of my current listings. Keep writing. Maybe it will help loosen my cholesterol blockages. :o) oldbuck

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/14/2019 7:20:00 PM

Oldbuck, I didn't mean to get your heart racing. This is just a playful poem from my pen. It wasn't my idea to place my photo here. It was suggested that I do. I appreciate your comment. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

John Hamilton

Date: 7/8/2019 9:41:00 PM

Nothing like a mystery, seeking for treasure, very delightful write!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/9/2019 11:45:00 AM

So kind of you to read this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts are appreciated. You are very talented with your pen. Thank you John. ~ Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 7/3/2019 9:16:00 AM

"Like a whisper gentle as the wind"... A lovely write Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/3/2019 2:48:00 PM

Such a beautiful thing to say. Thank you Joseph. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/3/2019 8:42:00 AM

I love your piem. Thank you for sharing your photo. You are beautiful in the image and your poetry, And right on..a man will never ask for directions,-)) PANAGIOTA

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/3/2019 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota. I appreciate your thoughts about my photo and my poetry. You are very kind. Yes, this made me smile as well. A man will not ask for directions. :) Many blessings to you my friend. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2019 7:08:00 PM

beautiful playful romantic poem, Brandy!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/2/2019 7:41:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/28/2019 3:52:00 PM

Very beautiful picture and poetry. Males being genetically geared toward physical beauty, we are blessed also in appreciating intellectual beauty in poetry whether it is written my male or female poet. Yours always gives both.. A fav, as this is a gem..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/28/2019 6:35:00 PM

Dear Robert, you are right in saying that men focus mostly on physical beauty. (I wasn't sure about placing my photo here, because of that fact) Thank you for seeing beyond the surface. Of me. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites. You being the only one. I wasn't expecting that. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2019 8:46:00 AM

A fun take on hide and seek. Some men are adept at following directions and are very familiar with the X factor. ;0)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/25/2019 10:14:00 PM

Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you Richard. :) Hide and Seek is fun, when found. :) Just saying. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/25/2019 6:14:00 AM

"a man will not ask for directions" You made me smile here...so true...unseen though...I've always treasured you...Nice one Brandy...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/25/2019 10:12:00 PM

:) Thank you Arturo, for saying you have always treasured me. So kind of you to say. Not asking for directions. This made me smile too. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 6/25/2019 5:05:00 AM

Gorgeous poem & pic Brandy...with that photo you won't be waiting too long for someone to find and treasure you. Just lovely. ~Charlie :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/25/2019 10:06:00 PM

Such a sweet thing to say. :) I am smiling. Thank you Charlie. You and your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/25/2019 4:14:00 AM

Beautiful ...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/25/2019 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Kai. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 6/24/2019 7:41:00 AM

Summer sizzle in your poetic wonder. Your playful scribble tantalizes. I'm sure in the night the Sandman will come and find the X.. believe!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/24/2019 6:50:00 PM

It's time to play, hide and seek. :) Find the Treasure. Thank you Lyric Man. Your thoughts always bring a smile. Yes, I believe. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/24/2019 12:24:00 AM

You are more treasure than Aladin's Lamp...richer in beauty and musical than the Sultans of Swing lol...now if the freckles on your back (dots) make up the Liberty Bell or at least a pair of Wings...well then, your my kind of gal lol...kidding aside Brandy...lovely write my friend...^WW^...{*J*}

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/24/2019 6:42:00 PM

Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you my Warrior with Wings. Unfortunately there are no freckles or dots on my back. And, I don't have wings. (Not yet, anyway) I am just me. You and your kind words are appreciated. :) Keep smiling my friend. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 6/23/2019 7:29:00 AM

Ah, the excitement of finding a treasure buried in the sand, just as the directions said, X marks the spot. I enjoyed this playful treasure hunt, B, nicely written my sweet friend. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/23/2019 7:25:00 PM

Thank you John. Exactly, the thrill of finding a hidden treasure. Your thoughts bring a smile. YES, X marks the Spot. Perhaps the wait will not be too long. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/22/2019 3:35:00 PM

Every breath of this poem is romantic..every sound inviting. Your poem flows like a daydream..but as real as the emotions it depicts and evokes. Splendid write, indeed! Enjoyed the read, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/22/2019 8:12:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. There are many emotions tangling around these words of mine. Of course romance holds this together, playfulness and passion. Some Sultry seasoning as well. :) Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/22/2019 3:11:00 PM

You know how to light fires sans Brandy! Aloha! Rico

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/22/2019 7:57:00 PM

Well, SUMMERTIME is here!! :) And, it's Hot. Thank you Rico for your wonderful comment. ~ Brandy

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/22/2019 1:57:00 PM

Mote than a scribble Brandy, a well written verse. Tom

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/22/2019 7:47:00 PM

Your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you Tom for reading these scribbles in sand. :) Brandy