Topless

I'm motoring about with my top down. I'm getting strange looks, but never a frown. Ladies eyes go green and mens’ chins drop. Until it clouds over and I have to stop. I press a little harder and up it comes, as the first drops of rain begin to drum. It lands with a click and on we go. Me and my darling convertible Peugeot.

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Viv Wigley

Date: 6/27/2018 1:04:00 AM

I can imagine you cruising with the top down, in your Ray-Bans, pastel coloured jacket with rolled-up sleeves, Jean. Sort of 'Miami Vice', with Guinness. Nice write! Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 6/27/2018 1:21:00 AM

Silly boy...if my top is down, then my jacket must be off!!!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/14/2018 5:57:00 PM

Cute... like always...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/16/2018 10:48:00 AM

Love to see it... I bet it'll be great...

Jean Murray
Date: 6/15/2018 1:37:00 AM

I must get back to base here Pashang. At the moment I am putting together my second book of picture poems, where I match personal photos to personal poems. Each book must have 60 poems, so progress is slow...but fun.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/13/2018 10:38:00 AM

I love the verse, Jean, way to go with the top down on your convertible... the title was really a catcher :) Hugs Eve

Jean Murray
Date: 6/13/2018 12:01:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Lyric Man

Date: 6/7/2018 10:39:00 PM

Clever fun write, Jean.. you're an artist!

Jean Murray
Date: 6/8/2018 3:43:00 AM

That's a lovely compliment Chance. Thank you.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/6/2018 7:31:00 PM

A fun poem, Jean. Superbly penned.

Jean Murray
Date: 6/7/2018 1:31:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/6/2018 12:13:00 PM

Living large, Jean:) Wonderful to read you again, love the humor.

Jean Murray
Date: 6/7/2018 1:31:00 AM

LOL.

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/6/2018 12:59:00 PM

You're going to have to put the top back down, I can't see!

Jean Murray
Date: 6/6/2018 12:57:00 PM

Yes Daniel, but they say anymore than a handful is wasted! Lovely to see you this evening. You and Eve called me back to the fold, so here I am....topless!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/6/2018 10:25:00 AM

Haha title certainly drew me in Jean, my brother had one,great in the fine weather. Bet you look super cool in your shades, hope the fine spell stays with you. Tom

Jean Murray
Date: 6/6/2018 10:59:00 AM

Actually Tom....I do!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/6/2018 8:27:00 AM

Giggles ;p xomo!

Jean Murray
Date: 6/6/2018 8:56:00 AM

Smirk!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2018 8:20:00 AM

Ha ha ha you tinker with that title lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 6/6/2018 8:55:00 AM

One has to draw the punters in somehow Jan.