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Tooth Ache

My jaw Is sore

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/19/2011 8:40:00 AM

Dang, I'm with ya' on this one. I got a bad one. :) Looking for DAISY CHain! The title reminds me of Pink Floyd. "The lunatic is on the path....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2010 9:11:00 PM

Hey, I see you have lots more here. Now I gotta keep seeing them. Where are you from? This one does not rhyme for me, so I am wondering if you are from England?? (or maybe New Jersey???)New JORYsee I think is what they say there!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/22/2010 4:29:00 AM

HI Nick! Oh! I hope it feels better soon ;)! Seriously, very nice footle :) and oops---sorry about that, didn't mean to it to be such a shock...if you want the happier version, please feel free to check out 20:10 -- http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=195688 hope this would be more your cup of tea ;) thanks --nikko :)

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/19/2010 7:59:00 AM

LOL, great footle. Good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2010 11:09:00 AM

lol funny one..P.D.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/18/2010 5:14:00 AM

Nice one. Good luck in the contest