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Today Im Feeling Blue

Today I’m feeling real blue Tomorrow I won’t But for today I still do

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2010 2:24:00 PM

I like this little poem, steve.

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/25/2009 3:40:00 PM

Hi Steve. Thanks so much for your thoughtful congrats on my haiku! So very appreciated. Well, this one I can relate very well to, as it seems I have the blues quite often these days. Great write. love, shar

Brian Strand

Date: 7/25/2009 2:18:00 AM

Nice one Steve,Thank you for your kind words and comments on my crystalline.Rgds Brian

Sue Mason

Date: 7/23/2009 2:40:00 PM

This is very clever but the form is a "Senryu" instead of a Haiku. A Senryu is the same syllable count as a haiku but is used to describe human nature as you have done so beautifully with this write. A Haiku is used when describing nature in general but not human ... smile ... being at PoetrySoup can be a real education ... LOL ... hope you don't mind my comments!!