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Lay your head upon my shoulder. Tears are heavy, your battle great. You’ve fought the fight. You’re in our arms to rest. We carry you at last, at last, The end in sight, Into the darkness of the night. May God accept you peaceably . May your heart be beating, Beneath His awesome wings. I hope your wings soar. Whispering “I love you.” Hope you hear it… All the love we can give It’s all we can give. It’s everything. 4/28/2021

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Date: 4/29/2021 8:50:00 PM
Nice final tribute. Good write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 3:54:00 AM
Thank you, Robert!
Date: 4/29/2021 7:33:00 AM
Such a lovely piece penned so well Kim, such fine wording throughout. Blessings,Gordon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 3:53:00 AM
Thank you, Gordon. Blessings, dear one!
Date: 4/28/2021 9:56:00 PM
Your ending lines are perfect, Kim. Do not change a thing! "It’s all we can give. It’s everything.:
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Date: 4/29/2021 4:40:00 AM
In the end we find that out...it’s the love. Thank you.
Date: 4/28/2021 5:44:00 PM
Sweetly, she departed. Heavenlward, she soared... Thanks to your vision, Kim. So touching, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2021 5:53:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 4/28/2021 7:52:00 AM
How awesome is your write not to mention heart wrenching. Now she is at peace. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2021 12:06:00 PM
Soon...
Date: 4/28/2021 7:50:00 AM
Lovely write. A whisper of hope... God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2021 12:06:00 PM
The end of her road
Date: 4/28/2021 6:10:00 AM
A very touching tribute Kim. She's now resting in peace. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2021 12:07:00 PM
Soon
Date: 4/28/2021 5:58:00 AM
Much love emanates in this prayer. Love is so powerful--your healing message resonates, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2021 12:07:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 4/28/2021 5:55:00 AM
Beautiful, Kim ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2021 12:07:00 PM
Thank you, Line ~

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