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Timeless Currents

"Mirrored Refrain": The poem is formed by three or more quatrains where two lines within the quatrain are the "mirrored refrain" or alternating refrain. The rhyme scheme is as follows-- xaBA, xbAB, xaBA, xbAB etc.. x represents the only lines that do not rhyme within the poem. A and B represent the refrain. Spirits in line with continuity Shining bright through contrast Insatiable you, everyday starts anew A love that is meant to last Growing together, learning more and more There is nothing we can't work through A love that is meant to last Insatiable you, everyday starts anew Swimming through the timeless currents of bliss Our souls unite, no impasse Insatiable you, everyday starts anew A love that is meant to last Time shared for eternity, we are meant to be Even in anger nothing is ever taboo A love that is meant to last Insatiable you, everyday starts anew Conversations stimulte a mental vacation A lasting impression sending me into climax Insatiable you, everyday starts anew A love that is meant to last Thirty years from now old and grey, we remain and never bid adieu A love that is meant to last Insatiable you, everyday starts anew Jared Pickett 11/30/2011

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Date: 2/13/2014 8:13:00 PM
I'm pretty new to Poetry Soup, but I've slowly been reading your poems. Timeless Currents spoke to me. It's beautiful, difficult to write, but the imagery is what I've wanted all my life. Who knows what the future will bring, but I loved this. Great job! Maria
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Date: 4/6/2012 8:17:00 AM
just yesterday I was thinking of u Lone Wolf ASavvy 1.. u are so welcomed back luv.. so happy u survived whatever kept u away .. and u were soooo missed.. glad u enjoyed my spider bite .. now if u want to enter u can read the rules and bite another poet to join in the fun.. please update me on the happenings in your life luv..
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Date: 4/5/2012 7:30:00 PM
Interesting poetic form..Seems like it would be hard to write..Thanks for stopping by..Good to hear from you again and read your work again..Thanks for the encouraging comments..I hope that you get to visit the shore soon also..Sara
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Date: 4/3/2012 8:38:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your piece this morning :)
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Date: 2/3/2012 8:02:00 AM
So wonderful to read your poetry once again Jared... Charma
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Date: 12/8/2011 10:52:00 AM
Good to see you posting again Jared...This one must be the one you dreamed of and waited for...good luck...enjoyed ...Marty
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