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Time For a Wish

cold white moonlight drapes diamonds all around me dances with shadows as curtains move with the wind time to make that perfect wish

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:02:00 PM

TaheraStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Tahera Mannan
Date: 11/21/2012 9:31:00 PM

Hey PD that was so touching. There is no thank you between friends. It is a great pleasure and honour for me to know you and read your wonderful work. God bless you always.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/16/2012 5:52:00 AM

Each line is a true gem, Tahera...last line sums it up to perfection...Congratulations! - Tim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2012 2:42:00 AM

belated congrats, tahera... how this floats!..: huggs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/14/2012 4:26:00 AM

Big congrats from Spain xx

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/13/2012 10:23:00 PM

beautiful tanka, well done. Lee

Kash Poet

Date: 10/12/2012 8:07:00 AM

Loved this on my first read Tahera!Congrats on your win in the contest.

Joseph May

Date: 10/12/2012 5:12:00 AM

congrats on your win Tahera

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2012 12:27:00 AM

tahera. I really like this one. BIG congrats. The last line goes so well with the theme.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/11/2012 4:22:00 PM

Hey YOU ..you have GOT the tanka form HUZZAH and exquiste image! [now do another focusing on the wish ..more more ]Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/11/2012 12:47:00 PM

A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

Irfana Ali Bhat

Date: 10/11/2012 12:28:00 PM

this is amazing....congrats on ur win...:))

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2012 12:40:00 PM

love this tanka, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/5/2012 2:47:00 PM

love this wonderful Tanka,

Kash Poet

Date: 10/5/2012 1:34:00 AM

Beautiful Tanka Tahera!Best wishes to you.

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/4/2012 10:49:00 PM

It was also time for a good tanka write. You have one here.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/4/2012 2:41:00 PM

a poetic feast celebrating beauty of wishes, tahera.. winning wishes and huggs!..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2012 2:13:00 PM

I still have not posted my white poems. Maybe you will get to them before I post mine!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2012 11:47:00 PM

Tahera, this is really pretty. You know. You could add to this and make two more poems for the white contest. I did a poem about whiteness (not posted yet) and then did two related ones in tanka and haiku style!!