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1St placement

Written 11/06/2024

Non Romantic Lyrical song

Mark springer sponsored

 

 

those days are gone, those days of midsummer, when Sun beat down on open roof tarmacs, lanes of limestone houses I remember, that sheltered the travellers with rucksacks. black bikes parked along the streets by ramblers, those coffee shops with aroma of toasts, smell of chopped wood from those shop with timbers, Italian restaurants canvassing roasts. Those days are gone, those days of midsummer, where leisure was routine, work too leisure, where months flew past from May to December, the years came and went and life was pleasure. no fast rich cars rushed past honking their horn, even time moved at designated pace, school children walked in groups every morn, every moment relished, life was no race. Those days are gone, those days of midsummer, when you and I were children, loved to laugh, when play was fun and sleep restful slumber, what we had we shared, lunch was half and half! We laughed at school, we laughed at Sunday church, at every excuse we met we laughed more, in gardens, in orchards, climbing tall birch, life was lived to the full, never a chore. Those days are gone, those days of midsummer, but my thoughts still wander around the streets, loved ones in our lives I still remember, those midsummer days are such good retreat!

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Date: 7/6/2024 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations! Those were the days...xo
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/6/2024 6:04:00 AM
Thanks Crystol!! Indeed they were!:)
Date: 7/5/2024 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Captured nostalgia well.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/5/2024 1:15:00 PM
Thanks David!!:)
Date: 7/4/2024 9:59:00 AM
Beautiful song of sweet summers and memories to cherish
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/4/2024 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Very Much Tom!!:)
Date: 7/4/2024 7:52:00 AM
Dear Krish, your lyric is a bittersweet beauty where the repetition of "Those days are gone, those days of midsummer" is used to great effect. I adore the vivid imagery and vibrant sense of nostalgia. Congratulations for your win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishers.. ~ Susan
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/4/2024 8:44:00 AM
Susan, Thank tou very much, for your wonderful words that are always a pleasure to read! Delighted my poem was liked! I can still smell those summer days of heat and shade!
Date: 6/12/2024 4:26:00 AM
Hello Krish, you swept me back to those carefree midsummer days! The wonderful details and wistful longing for that simple, joyful time? Just beautiful. Masterfully done! - Blessings, Daniel
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/12/2024 4:35:00 AM
Dear Daniel Thanks very much! We all have memories we like to travel back to and midsummer is such a beautiful time!! Thanks

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