This Is Wrong, But

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Rude people who think only of themselves - I would like to sit atop mantle shelves Yes, I know that is wrong but it's where they belong when they act like those impish little elves

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White Sage

Date: 3/15/2016 7:15:00 AM

elves, i hope they won't see this lol...nice write Lin, and i support this view

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 3/1/2016 6:29:00 PM

"If mantling the rude is wrong, I don't want to be right!"... :-) Funny but so, so honest and true!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2016 6:42:00 PM

lol Walter. A good adaptation of Percy Sledge's great. Or do you prefer Luther Ingram? Thanks so much.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/1/2016 2:29:00 AM

This was funny and different, Lin. Those little elves are getting quite popular during Christmas time, and I thought it clever how you turned that around, making THEM the naughty ones.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2016 3:13:00 AM

Merci, Tim. No one is perfect so I'm sure elves(as if they exist) have their impish moments.

Jill Spagnola

Date: 2/28/2016 10:27:00 PM

Wow, Lin! I love your poem and the quote you used in your write...you are much kinder than me..I'd like to sit them atop somewhere not so nice:), jill

Lin Lane
Date: 2/28/2016 11:01:00 PM

Thank you, and I read you loud and clear.