This Is Heaven

Two Entwine as ONE An Eternity of LOVE Always, Forever

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/8/2012 6:54:00 PM

Very gorgeous senryu to read this day. You are great at these! Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2010 6:26:00 PM

I see you really like the word entwine. It is a word that defines your love for Lenore!

Abraham L

Date: 5/12/2009 7:43:00 AM

So true, i like this one short sweet, and to the point. Two must be entwine as one, i like how you said as one. if the oneness is not there, no point. Very good i like this an oeye opener.

Diane Christian

Date: 3/19/2009 12:39:00 PM

aww sweet, I can relate to this poem, I had a hard time before but once God changed my life around he gave me a wonderful christian husband, and if it's from God then it is heaven, thanks for all your feedback on my poetry, I look forward to reading more of yours also its so great and so encouraging, God bless you from diane

Alley Poe

Date: 3/14/2009 11:17:00 PM

it is always a pleasure to read your poems. and thank you for commenting mine as well. ...Alley

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/28/2008 3:32:00 AM

Nice senryu, you posted a question, asking me if my poem was the second half of my quatrain. I wanted to tell you that it was. I usually write my poems consecutively. You are very observant, thankx for the comment.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/25/2008 4:47:00 AM

Succinct and beautifully expressed! HAPPY HOLIDAYS ny friend! God bless, Keith

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/24/2008 9:48:00 AM

This is heaven - I'm so lucky to share this with my wife - Merry Christmas & God Bless HGarvey (Still think your name is the coolest) Merry Christmas & God Bless you my friend, MJ