This Fresh Day

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By twilight, the west breeze sings a catchy tune, Pearl's fingers raved by stars and the roved moon. When you're down, I'll be there to hearten your day, If you're antsy, I'll yearn to allay your dismay and pray. I'll shed a tear and ease your pain while we are here, Vibes are forlornly sad, won't let you wiggle to the rear. But here we are, wishing to drop into another place, Let us look at the brain trap's root in clear space. I was all I'm not in one shot—creative and attractive, When drawing blusterous is the unique alternative. I remember having pals, pens, paper, and a dream, Belonging to what's not lifeless or hollow, as a team. Live in the present and simply absorb everything in, Yield all your focus forthwith, or sire another skin. Don't let your mind stray to what will unfold next, Don't misuse this chance; rather, yield your best. We are not always urged to strain any color we see, But to design hues and become who you aim to be. Don't allow kismet to lead your rush through today, Albeit, too many superb times will be thrown away. For the one, you're with now, at this special time, Allot them your utter care; be there and sublime. When ready, put on a vibe and start the journey. In concrete cracks, roses may bloom; unseat worry, Our life's doom can be twisted in a jiff second, Once it is waged, views and deeds are reckoned. In just a few minutes, you may meet a friend. Discover love, or watch a story trigger or end. Eons are all we have, yet are costly and few, Optional of owning it or squandering it, up to you. Listen to my heart, look into my eyes, heal my pain, Kiss me, let's a gambit, and abscond from here again. Learn to rise and fall. This life is not looking at you, Be vehement, zealous, and apt to be over your shoe. I'm caring for you; you are the rhythm of my heart, Your love plugs into my life, as we've never been apart. Written: March 15, 2023 Now That We Are Here Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/16/2023 3:31:00 PM

Hello Sotto, this is beautifully done. I am making it my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene/

Paige Hind

Date: 3/16/2023 12:50:00 PM

This is amazing. So much introspection, truth, and cheer. Loved it, Scotto!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/16/2023 8:55:00 AM

You have erected a magnificent edifice of inspiring Couplets, my dearest friend, Lasaad. A joy to read and ponder about. Be blessed!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2023 7:34:00 AM

- "In concrete cracks, roses may bloom; unseat worry" ... tell me that there is always a hope ... no matter if the days feel heavy and gray - an excellent poem, Las - best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/16/2023 5:24:00 AM

Much inspiration you convey throughout my friend. Your wise words resonate.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/16/2023 3:04:00 AM

Great poem, Much to think about.

Valsa George

Date: 3/15/2023 10:58:00 PM

"Eons are all we have, yet are costly and few, Optional of owning it or squandering it, up to you.". So true. There is only a limited time left for us. It is up to us if we should make use of it or squander it away in useless pursuit. This poem contains such invaluable gems of wisdom. A great entry for the contest. All the Best, dear friend!