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These Days, My Days

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These days, my days, come in stanzas grouped by mood and circumstances. Older days linger longer in so many ways less in a daze, less lost in a maze, with muse engaged in self contemplation old hands of time mesmerised in slow motion. For these days, my days, are more cherished, swirled around the tongue and relished like an old wine popped open breathes, and gets rid of its wrinkles and dead leaves. The opening stanza of flippant youth days extravagantly splurged and set ablaze sets the scene for middle-day saga when your family drove the drama. But these days, my last days in seclusion are timely days, for me to make conclusion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/18/2018 10:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Flow and rhyme right on. It's the self awareness I'm drawn to in this poem.
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Date: 6/14/2018 8:42:00 PM
I enjoyed the images in your poem, John, especially the comparison to savoring wine.
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Date: 6/13/2018 2:51:00 PM
I think many can relate to these feelings John, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2018 8:44:00 PM
Nicely done John, congratulations on your well deserved win.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/11/2018 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations for your win John! :)
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Date: 6/11/2018 1:39:00 PM
Great poem, John! Congrats on your win in Daniel's superb contest.
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Date: 6/11/2018 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations John on your placement in my contest. Your last verse pretty much sums up my entire life:)
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Date: 6/1/2018 9:48:00 AM
Very nice rhyming, John. Good write.
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