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THE WISH - POTD

POTD 23rd Nov 2023
THE WISH
As the softer rose shades of twilight fades With a heartfelt gravity, darkness descends Oblivious to the North winds stinging bite ‘Neath this star-speckled sky, his devotion extends to that quintessential ‘Component of Time’ that stills surrendering to the moment, most mortals miss In this mystical flash of sweet dispose His ardent wish for her ~ An ‘Immortal Rose’ His Mother ~ so graciously accepting her thorns Qualms have not stolen her persona, its joy Unbent by toil, a conqueror of storms A courageous heroine in the eyes of her boy Why can’t love embodied in rose petals last? In solemn simplicity, a child’s query gets passed Swathe in crystalline warmth from a galaxy far Gifted Immortality is borne ~ on wings of a star

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Date: 11/27/2023 4:53:00 AM
Maria, your poem is a touching tribute to the enduring love and admiration between a mother and her child. Your use of vivid imagery and emotive language beautifully captures the essence of this bond, making the poem a truly heartfelt read. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 11/26/2023 5:37:00 AM
Hopeful and peaceful Maria
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Date: 11/25/2023 4:59:00 PM
I see as well that it is POTD. A big hug and congratulations. I commend the judges on their excellent taste.
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Date: 11/25/2023 4:58:00 PM
This is so magical. Love it!
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Date: 11/25/2023 4:24:00 AM
Dear Maria, first of all, congratulations on receiving also POTD for this gem, and i must say the way you’ve painted imagery throughout this is so feminine, as in very delicate and soft and so touching, I absolutely love the rhymes too and how you’ve started the poem too is so very captivating. “ Why can’t love embodied in rose petals last? In solemn simplicity, a child’s query gets passed“ so heartfelt and soulfully divine. The way you express is beyond impeccable. A fave for me definitely
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Date: 11/24/2023 6:24:00 AM
Indeed worthy of POTD! Beautiful! Love: quintessential ‘Component of Time and the question at the end. Fave
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/24/2023 4:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim, for your visit and comment. So glad you like THE WISH poem and video. Also thanks for the Fave Hugs
Date: 11/24/2023 1:57:00 AM
Lovely poetry Maria, congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 11/24/2023 4:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Belle, for your visit and wishes. I'm so glad you liked the video poem. Hugs
Date: 11/24/2023 12:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:28:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jeanette. Appreciate it...Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 7:44:00 PM
A wonderful poem, " softer rose shades of twilight fades" I love the image. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:02:00 AM
Thanks so much dear Eve, so glad you liked it. Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 3:16:00 PM
This is so well done, it leaves stunned in silence. :) congrats on POTD dear heart
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:04:00 AM
Thanks so much, lovely Vie, so good to see you; thanks so much for the support here and on FB my sweet friend. Lots of Love
Date: 11/23/2023 1:24:00 PM
Hearty Congratulations on your well earned POTD, Maria, with this so lovely poem.
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:05:00 AM
Thanks so much Sotto. So glad you liked it. Greatly appreciated ...Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 1:22:00 PM
Dear Maria, This is a lovely POTD. Congratulations and Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Enjoyed..
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:06:00 AM
I wish you and your family the same dear Nancy. Thanks so much for the lovely visit and comment...Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 12:56:00 PM
Many congratulations dear Maria on POTD with this truly beautiful poem full of exquisite lines. Love the image of the rose and the last line especially. A very touching, tender write and a joy to read. Thank you for sharing your immense talent. Hugs and smiles :):)
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:10:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Christina; so glad you liked it. My narrator brought it to life, he's a lovely person who happens to be the backup singer for Cliff Richard. Lots of love and hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 12:05:00 PM
Maria, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania, I appreciate your support and lovely visit...Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 8:25:00 AM
I enjoyed your heartfelt poetry, Maria. Thank you for sharing your loving thoughts with us through your eloquent poetry, my friend. Congratulation on your poem receiving the POTD honor. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Bill, my pleasure sharing my work, I feel I must give credit to my narrator David, he brought it to life.. A very talented actor and singer, also a backup singer to Cliff Richard. Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family. Lots of love
Date: 11/23/2023 7:13:00 AM
Back with big congratulations for a well-deserved POTD. Victor xxx
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:15:00 AM
Thanks so much, dearest Victor. Love and hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 7:11:00 AM
"on wings of a star, rose petals last." Because in a dream, anything is possible. Your thoughts are beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. So thankful for my mother and her unconditional love. Congratulations Maria, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:18:00 AM
How lovely to see you dear Brandy, so glad you liked it. Your Mum sounds wonderful, all the Angels that touch us. We are so fortunate. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours...lots of love
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/23/2023 9:41:00 AM
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Date: 11/23/2023 6:37:00 AM
A distant star makes a wish come true. Wonderful write Maria, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Joseph, wonderful to see you. Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 6:33:00 AM
Very lovely write Maria. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Linda, so happy that you liked it. Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "THE WISH" is a lovely write. I enjoyed reading this one. I love flowers. I love pick roses the best. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Paula; so glad you liked it. Roses are the best, there's something so magical about them. Have a lovely Thanksgiving Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations Maria on POTD!! Nice to meet you also!! Debx
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:23:00 AM
It is lovely to meet you Deb; thanks so much for the visit and lovely comment. Appreciate it ..Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 5:41:00 AM
True poetry lives... and thrives! Nice potd choice Maria
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:25:00 AM
Ain't that the truth!Thanks so much, Tommy. Love and Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 5:32:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Just love it. God bless you and congrats on POTD - AND - Happy Thanksgiving. Love, Gina
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:30:00 AM
Thanks so much dear Regina. God bless you and your family and Happy Thanksgiving to you too...Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 5:27:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Maria. Glad to see you in this space. Enjoy your special day today.
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Vijay. I appreciate your support always...Hugs
Date: 11/23/2023 5:00:00 AM
Fab' Maria. Mother's love is truly the best. Happy to see this a POTD! A wonderful Thanksgiving treat :) Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 11/24/2023 12:32:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Charlie. I appreciate your support always both here and FB my friend...Hugs
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